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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-03-29 10:42 AM

I am so sorry I haven't been here much...I am working 2 jobs and am so busy I hardly have time to think....I wanted to share this with you and then I will return a little later to comment on some of the wonderful work I have missed so much...I love you all dearly....and miss the way your talents fill me with such peace and joy....**big hugs**

EACH SINGLE DROP OF BLOOD

I
can
see
light
filling
a world
where hate
reigned as king.
Such time its taken
YOUR message clear
to spread so far and wide
in this world left in dark fear.
YOUR sacrefice men are aware
with the pain YOU have endured.
YOU gave YOUR life for each of us
so that paradise we could now earn.
With each single drop of blood spilt
YOU paid the price for our sins
not asking much of us but
to live loving HIM

Karen Torbiak ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-29 10:43 AM

A very timely, well versed sharing, Karen. Thank you!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-03-29 10:44 AM

Hi Karen, I've been wondering where you have been.
Oh it is good to read your words.
This was a wonderful Easter message and so nicely presented.
I always enjoy your work.
*hugs*

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-03-29 10:44 AM

These shape poems always impress me...great job on this one, Karen!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-03-29 10:48 AM

Done...only as you can do....such a blessing
your talent is...saying so much of HIM to US.

Thank You for this Karen...very beautiful

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-03-29 11:47 AM

Karen~

this is ever so touching, and so peaceful, thank you for sharing this on the Holy.....weekend.....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-29-2002 11:47 AM).]

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2002-03-29 11:56 AM

This is beautiful Karen
Working two jobs ... and still, you find the time to write in praise of our lord
~
I'm sure he's smiling

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-03-29 04:17 PM

Beautiful..loved the format...Karen I was so worried something happened to you..glad to see you are fine and back to give us a bit of your "star time"

hugss
M

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-03-29 06:46 PM

Wonderful write here Karen! I have missed you my friend

TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

9 posted 2002-03-29 06:50 PM

*clap* Beautiful poem, visually and emotionally

The man of few words...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-03-29 06:53 PM

I love the way you shaped this poem, Karen...and also the way you wrote it...of course. I was wondering where you were, so I'm glad that you stopped in for a while to let us know.

~lots of hugggsss...and hope you get back here again soon!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-03-29 08:54 PM

maureen and i were wondering today where you were..so you have been missed Karen..this is a lovely poem..very creative indeed..hugs

~Vic

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-03-29 09:05 PM

Karen, a very inspirational shape poem indeed. You have been missed sweet lady! Stay well and happy. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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