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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-28 09:59 PM


Retribution
For Magnus …….. I win

Magnus darling boy I have bad news for you
It’s time to pay the piper what are you gonna do
Retribution’s coming will you promise me
To simply cease writing such fabulous poetry
I’m not asking for much a slip up is all
You have to know darling that is friendships call
If your meter was off, the rhyme wasn’t fine
I’d be happier darling, I’d say you are divine

Magnus darling boy it’s time to pay your dues
Come on my darling friend this you will have to choose
It’s time for me to shine time for you to share
You can’t go on soaring it simply isn’t fair
The glory, the kudos the grace and the fame
It’s about time darling that I showed you my flame
Hand the plaudits over let me fly so high
It’s not just my ego I want to touch the sky

Magnus darling boy I’m coming after you
I told you I’d be here, now that your time is through
Too late for a sorry too late for your pleas
I won’t be accepting your late apologies
Sorry can’t cut it, your writing is too fine
And now my darling boy it’s time for me to shine
I want my writing to illume this blue page
How can it do so dear when you are all the rage?

Magnus darling boy you better run away
Take to the hills my dear friend, get out of my way
This isn’t a threat darling just some advice
It’s time to yield Magnus it’s time to pay the price
I warned you and I begged you to hide from me
Now this is the consequence oh what tragedy
Gone but not forgotten, I’ll recall your light
Magnus darling boy I just knew I’d win this fight

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2002-03-28 10:10 PM


Watch out, Marsha's on the warpath!

sky

Aimster
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2 posted 2002-03-28 10:36 PM


magnus,

sounds like a challenge to me you
better watch out...big bad marsha
is gonna getcha! lol...this is a great
write sis...thanks for making me laugh!

love you.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-03-28 10:40 PM


Uh Oh!
Watch out, Barry!
Marsha's on the warpath and she's really good at making war!

Great poem, Marsha!
~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-03-28 11:43 PM


:

(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...Barry...Marsha is back with a vengeance, I suggest you plan your next move and quick if you will stand any chance at all! (smiles) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much, I can't wait to see what his next move is! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-29 11:03 AM



Oh, I think Magnus is in regroup
it's time consuming to recoup
words of song that wing on air
with talk of Knights, and Ladies, Faire

given time, and with his ink
he will ponder and rightly, think
of lines to skewer you in rhyme
he's just thinking, taking time...

so tread carefully, our Marsha, dear
or he shall write to shed your tear...

Startime
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6 posted 2002-03-29 11:04 AM


*giggling* Oh my...well done.... go get him Marsha....LOL I love it....**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-03-29 07:36 PM


Mushy, Mushy....so very squshy...
How does the poetry go?
Aren't ya feelin' kinda frisky?
Your cockiness surely shows....
....
    ......
          ........
I sit upon the wall and ponder if
I should write more into this tiff
Knowing that “SHE” will feel
that she won, HA..HA..get real

Oh lady of the land across the moat
Doth thee know that thee doth gloat
Doth thy mind perchance be now lost
For my dear, mine towel is not tossed

Wilt the wench return to thy own room
keep safe, fear all, riding wood broom
For a King of Knights pen has been wet
and thee, fair maid..O’dear..go, go fret

My blade is sharpened to cut the glass
of goblet and quill of a darling lass.
My mind, though slow from my old age
shall quickly bid thee loss this page.

Fear well Darling Girl, my ink flows
and now I really must git and goes
A masterpiece of write I shall paste
Upon the walls while you dear girl.....

Retreat in utterly haste!!!!!!

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-03-29 08:36 PM


I think we are in need of a tie breaker here Mushy girl!  Good write!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ShadowRider
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9 posted 2002-03-29 08:47 PM


~and in thiiiiiiiis corneaaah we have the Defending English Champeeeen:
Maaaaaaaaasha!~

~and in thisssssss corneaaaah, we have the Up and coming Challenger,
weighin' in at a svelte pentameter weight:  Maaaaaaaaaggg-Nuuuuusssss~

Gentlemen
and Lady
Shake pens,
and come out
WRITING!

[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (03-29-2002 10:35 PM).]

Victoria
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10 posted 2002-03-29 09:09 PM


laughing at jeffs reply haa..yes i think i would like to see barry in a pair of those boxing shorts haa..i use to like them when they were shorter...they are so darn long now..ha...dont get to see the guys legs anymore..loved reading Marsha..hugss

           ~Vic

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