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Retribution For Magnus …….. I win
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Retribution For Magnus …….. I win |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Retribution For Magnus …….. I win Magnus darling boy I have bad news for you It’s time to pay the piper what are you gonna do Retribution’s coming will you promise me To simply cease writing such fabulous poetry I’m not asking for much a slip up is all You have to know darling that is friendships call If your meter was off, the rhyme wasn’t fine I’d be happier darling, I’d say you are divine Magnus darling boy it’s time to pay your dues Come on my darling friend this you will have to choose It’s time for me to shine time for you to share You can’t go on soaring it simply isn’t fair The glory, the kudos the grace and the fame It’s about time darling that I showed you my flame Hand the plaudits over let me fly so high It’s not just my ego I want to touch the sky Magnus darling boy I’m coming after you I told you I’d be here, now that your time is through Too late for a sorry too late for your pleas I won’t be accepting your late apologies Sorry can’t cut it, your writing is too fine And now my darling boy it’s time for me to shine I want my writing to illume this blue page How can it do so dear when you are all the rage? Magnus darling boy you better run away Take to the hills my dear friend, get out of my way This isn’t a threat darling just some advice It’s time to yield Magnus it’s time to pay the price I warned you and I begged you to hide from me Now this is the consequence oh what tragedy Gone but not forgotten, I’ll recall your light Magnus darling boy I just knew I’d win this fight Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Watch out, Marsha's on the warpath!  sky |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
magnus, sounds like a challenge to me  youbetter watch out...big bad marsha is gonna getcha! lol...this is a great write sis...thanks for making me laugh! love you. amy  "you can't stop |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Uh Oh! Watch out, Barry! Marsha's on the warpath and she's really good at making war! Great poem, Marsha!  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 : (giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...Barry...Marsha is back with a vengeance, I suggest you plan your next move and quick if you will stand any chance at all! (smiles) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much, I can't wait to see what his next move is! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I think Magnus is in regroup it's time consuming to recoup words of song that wing on air with talk of Knights, and Ladies, Faire given time, and with his ink he will ponder and rightly, think of lines to skewer you in rhyme he's just thinking, taking time... so tread carefully, our Marsha, dear or he shall write to shed your tear... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Oh my...well done....  go get him Marsha....LOL I love it....**big big hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, Mushy....so very squshy... How does the poetry go? Aren't ya feelin' kinda frisky? Your cockiness surely shows.... .... ...... ........ I sit upon the wall and ponder if I should write more into this tiff Knowing that “SHE” will feel that she won, HA..HA..get real Oh lady of the land across the moat Doth thee know that thee doth gloat Doth thy mind perchance be now lost For my dear, mine towel is not tossed Wilt the wench return to thy own room keep safe, fear all, riding wood broom For a King of Knights pen has been wet and thee, fair maid..O’dear..go, go fret My blade is sharpened to cut the glass of goblet and quill of a darling lass. My mind, though slow from my old age shall quickly bid thee loss this page. Fear well Darling Girl, my ink flows and now I really must git and goes A masterpiece of write I shall paste Upon the walls while you dear girl..... Retreat in utterly haste!!!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think we are in need of a tie breaker here Mushy girl! Good write! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
~and in thiiiiiiiis corneaaah we have the Defending English Champeeeen: Maaaaaaaaasha!~ ~and in thisssssss corneaaaah, we have the Up and coming Challenger, weighin' in at a svelte pentameter weight: Maaaaaaaaaggg-Nuuuuusssss~ and Lady Shake pens, and come out WRITING! [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (03-29-2002 10:35 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
laughing at jeffs reply haa..yes i think i would like to see barry in a pair of those boxing shorts haa..i use to like them when they were shorter...they are so darn long now..ha...dont get to see the guys legs anymore..loved reading Marsha..hugss ~Vic |
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