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Not So Simply Loving You!
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Not So Simply Loving You! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Forget you, let you go, and be free If love was as easy as this writing If feelings were then so unexciting maybe, just maybe, it could once be If knowing you was from me taken If my eyes were blinded to sight my nose, not sensing a perfume could you simply be then shaken If a heart beating strong slowed and drying lips were again moist If palms were dry, not so sweaty How about all of this, my anxiety. Does love always utter these sighs cause the pit to have butterflies steer the deep ache of missing you What is it, that loving we does do Does love wait into the late hours bring in a bouquet of pretty flowers Make a heart race hard and throb steal away precious time from job. If love consumes you as does to me then I must reveal this most simply that love brings to me every bit of this and love is real, not hit it or miss. So, if you think I can just say adieu after so deeply falling all over you Then I guess I will have to reveal that I not so simply, madly love you. [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-28-2002 09:09 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Barry, I know how you feel, sometimes it is easy simply saying we love someone, but then there also come times where we must confess how madly with all our hearts we love someone! (big hugggssssss) This is very thoughtfully beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Barry! Enjoyed this one so much tonight...couldn't you hear the big sighs coming from Canada? *SIGH* ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah good for you...when we all go around wishing for things to be "simple again" you have stopped us in our collective tracks and said ...it's not as simple as it appears! Bravo! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, thanx my fine friend...such is life and love...surely is.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy!!!!! YES...I heard the sighs from up north.... Glad to see you again...hope the comp. is fixed now...have missed you.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ...I guess if life and love were so simple, we would not be spending so many hours of our lives working at it...and writing about a subject that is so boring and dull...Ha!!! Don't we wish!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception…………… but it should be shouldn’t it, obviously you’ve not surrendered at all. SO BE IT Wonderful flow and rhythm, as you seem to always do you’ve painted the picture to PERFECTION. You write so perfectly Too late, look behind you darling boy………. Here I come…….. You’ll be sorry now Game on……   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
She thinks a bonk I will get and tries hard to make fret but the dogs are starvin and it's Mushy I'm servin. So...put the bonk up tonite and bask in a full moon's lite For I know the dogs are hungry and you so utterly love this... MY Poetry!!!! |
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