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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-28 10:30 AM

let my arms enfold
if heaven is in my arms
it shines in your eyes

Inspired by: Whispers to a Poet

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-28-2002 11:18 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-03-28 10:34 AM

answering the invite with class... nicely done my friend.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-28 11:15 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, your words are always so amazing and a delight to read! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-28 11:19 AM

Well now...this oozes charm!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-03-28 12:13 PM

Ditto to all the above, very beautiful....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-03-28 12:37 PM

let my arms enfold
if heaven is in my arms
it shines in your eyes

Smiling with moist lips
*Blushing* warmth rises from touch
Eyes kissing your thoughts

I just love senryus and haikus and especially yours

M

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-03-28 05:48 PM

beautiful

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-28 07:59 PM

...Classy...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-03-28 09:46 PM

you are #1 at these senryu's!!
Always, you make me smile

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-03-28 10:28 PM

Sigh..I wonder why these make me feel so melancholy.
Beautiful words.
Sandra

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

10 posted 2002-03-28 11:22 PM

The fact that this is so short makes the feeling left by it that much stronger. Awesome
~Chrissy

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2002-03-29 12:12 PM

*sighs* this is simply beautiful!

You write the most romantic senryus ever!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-03-29 12:43 PM

Interloper...Heaven is always in the arms of love. Wonderful verse...subtility, gentleness are found in the embrace of these words. ***Ivy Rose

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2002-04-02 11:48 AM

InterLoper~
Hope you can hear this *sigh* ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2002-04-02 01:36 PM

*sigh*.....didn't want to sigh, but before I knew it escaped from within....enjoyed the warmth within.

Charisma

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2002-04-02 01:38 PM

sigh....beautiful....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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