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Metaphysical Mist
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Metaphysical Mist |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Metaphysical Mist See, what happens is I shall grow old ~ ancient of limb, my skin shall grow cold, only recalling as once shy and tall, and that day I was kissed in the physical mist love transcended all its intentions so great was the charm ~ we saw no harm ~ being each one of two of the most blessed 'tis why it was I then loved him the best he came late to this lass ~ seasons had passed ~ still one season left to come to her he swift did run, all pasts left behind only him on her mind, their love never blind pure treasures of kind gone late, this purest loving season though they'd known long the reason a relationship never physical more on the mystical where love therein trickled they reached far inside where true love resides reaching for metaphysical they took essential reality blending charming duality with supernaturality transcending all the planes there, their love remained so shimmering fine like sparkling red wine commingling minds see, what happens is we shall grow old ~ ancient of limb, our skin shall grow bold in vivid recall reliving days' stall that day we kissed in metaphysical mist repost from 20 December 2000 revised 28 March 2002 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done my friend... trips down the page and off the tongue with ease....and wisdom |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea love the thought of this! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
don't you love the mist caressing your face in dreams metaphysical Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, I believe the true magic of love is to make it metaphysical so it can feel like a fantasy with so many foreign places and dreas to explore and to recall them every day love sings on! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, just wanted you to know I popped in to read a few and...oh my...look at this gem I found! Just had to let you know how much I love this one and it sounds wonderful when read aloud!! Well done! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Sunshine ... Gosh ... I am glad you decided to repost this one ... I really liked it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know Traveler. . . I've always liked this one. . . and I like it even better now. . . the mysteries of life. . . aren't they fun??? excellent my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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