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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-03-28 09:24 AM


Metaphysical Mist

See, what happens is
I shall grow old ~
ancient of limb,
my skin shall grow cold,
only recalling as
once shy and tall, and
that day I was kissed
in the physical mist

love transcended
all its intentions
so great was the charm
~ we saw no harm ~
being each one of two
of the most blessed
'tis why it was I then
loved him the best

he came late to this lass
~ seasons had passed ~
still one season left to come
to her he swift did run,
all pasts left behind
only him on her mind,

their love never blind
pure treasures of kind

gone late, this purest loving season

though they'd known long
the reason
a relationship never physical
more on the mystical
where love therein trickled
they reached far inside
where true love resides
reaching for metaphysical

they took essential reality
blending charming duality
with supernaturality
transcending all the planes

there, their love remained

so shimmering fine
like sparkling red wine
commingling minds

see, what happens is we
shall grow old ~
ancient of limb,
our skin shall grow bold
in vivid recall
reliving days' stall
that day we kissed
in metaphysical mist


repost from
20 December 2000
revised 28 March 2002



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-28 09:26 AM


nicely done my friend... trips down the page and off the tongue with ease....and wisdom
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2 posted 2002-03-28 10:40 AM


Karilea

love the thought of this!

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3 posted 2002-03-28 11:17 AM


don't you love the mist
caressing your face in dreams
metaphysical

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2002-03-28 11:24 AM




(smiles) I love this, sweet friend, I believe the true magic of love is to make it metaphysical so it can feel like a fantasy with so many foreign places and dreas to explore and to recall them every day love sings on! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-28 12:17 PM


Karilea, just wanted you to know I popped in to read a few and...oh my...look at this gem I found!  Just had to let you know how much I love this one and it sounds wonderful when read aloud!!  Well done!  Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-03-28 12:43 PM



Hi Sunshine ...

Gosh ... I am glad you decided to repost this one ...
I really liked it.

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7 posted 2002-03-28 04:00 PM


you know Traveler. . . I've always liked this one. . . and I like it even better now. . .

the mysteries of life. . . aren't they fun???

excellent my friend. . .

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