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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-03-27 04:00 PM



Loving alone
with desire

Left to flame
lonely fire

lost in love
once held

drifting alone
tears welled

Loving alone

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-03-27 04:01 PM


Hello Barry

This was simply beautiful!

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2002-03-27 04:38 PM



withered sighs
red-eyed goodbyes

leaves rustling
skirts languish

green pools
invite

the well
is dry

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3 posted 2002-03-27 04:41 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-03-27 09:31 PM




(sigh) This is a little sad but sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, always love yourself and convince yourself that everything will be alright, for true love is destined to sing to your heart forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-27 11:17 PM


Good writing Magnus...James
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6 posted 2002-03-27 11:52 PM


wow I like it Barry. you are very good at these 20 or less!! Encore!!
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7 posted 2002-03-28 03:40 PM


I know here. *S* You've described it well. *S*
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