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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-03-28 08:06 AM



Run down three flights and then run up
that you forgot your wallet in a huff
spin around the room to celestial designs
enacted search for the misplaced, ends in finds?

Frustrated then you swing to work
"someone upstairs hates me, I'm a jerk",
it may take time for you to order yourself
place important objects on the right shelf?

have some directions, oriented goals
seek employment, still on the dole
take all the necessary documents along
downstair flights carry inner songs.

"I'll work off that unneeded angst"
sit around fires and give some thanks
tell true stories of my many flights
how organized lives became delights.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-28-2002 03:18 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-03-28 08:17 AM


ecrivan,
This has happened to me many times, enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 2002-03-28 12:17 PM




(sigh) There are too times where I am absent-minded and I just wish I could organize myself a little more but then also have the freedom to express willingly without restraint also! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-03-28 01:58 PM


am working off that state of angst...

nicely done
M

ecrivan
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my own state
4 posted 2002-03-28 03:17 PM


This is dedicated to a musician friend of mind, he works at a greasy spoon by day and often forgets things...he says.


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