Open Poetry #19 |
Seaside Lady |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Plunging to the bottom of the sea skimming the coral reefs avoiding the sharp edges that once threatened me. Holding my breath a little longer, swimming through my underwater garden. I've no words to describe what can't be heard. I've no needs to be met when I feel I'm drowning, I have no desire to be saved from the peace in my mind that stirs; in the deepest part of my sea and all that I hold sacred to me. Where I've found my tranquility my heaven on earth swimming around me through me with me. I've learned to change with the tides and the constant currents that pull forecasting undertows that no longer frighten me. For it is here on my ~sea~ where I live and let go, and come up for air Where I breathe~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, this is a wonderful metaphor for "going with the flow" and letting our hearts take course! (kiss on cheek) May you forever breathe with hope and joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Holding my breath a little longer, swimming through my underwater garden. I've no words to describe what can't be heard. I've no needs to be met when I feel I'm drowning, I have no desire to be saved from the peace in my mind Damn, I love this! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ It is just that sometimes, learning to change with the tides....I keep this, I love the sea and all its mystery, vast darkness, and peace it can bring.... HUGGSSS Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, I find your words and pictures so inviting. Well done. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ The flow isn't so bad after all, considering my options, it's certainly easier than fighting the battle. Thanks Duncan~ Hey, I'm happy you liked that, our needs are of our own making, likewise we are the only ones who can save us from ourselves. Thank you Duncan~ Lauren~ The sea is a magical place indeed, I love going there alone after a storm has passed, and yet there is not a nicer day that I would rather spend than in the summer sun watching the water glisten. It truly mesmerizes me. Thanks for reading Lauren~ ~hugs~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sneaking up on me eh? Thank you Larry for telling me so! I will survive after all, funny I just figured that out!!! Thanks for being such a sweetie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I've learned to change with the tides and the constant currents that pull forecasting undertows that no longer frighten me. For it is here on my ~sea~ where I live and let go, and come up for air Where I breathe~~~ I love this reflection on life Lori. Isn’t it amazing what we learn about ourselves, when we go through hard times, and come out the other end, still standing, and stronger than before. Stand tall and straight and proclaim to the world, I'm still here!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
they say the winds mature the vine' so the fruit thereof is sweeter sounds like it is true... enjoyed this view of you |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nice, delicate words here...I liked! K |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Lori, your words always touch my heart. Sad and sweet or just loving, they go deep. I loved this so much it is going into my library. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I've no words to describe what can't be heard. I've no needs to be met when I feel I'm drowning, I have no desire to be saved from the peace in my mind that stirs; in the deepest part of my sea Beautifully descriptive, Lori...It sounds like you must be a good swimmer... `hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I liked it very much, thanks for sharing Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Blues Yes, your tranquility...beautifully written place of heart. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Tracey~ You read me right and exactly how my words were intended! We gather strength through our times of trouble, it's the old sink or swim syndrome....and I'm still here, more determined than ever. Thank you Tracey~ Dark Stranger~ Thank you for your thoughts on the subject, they are worth the time it took to write this, and I'll hold onto them when I'm about to go under again. Severn~ I'm so glad you enjoyed, they are simple words but nonetheless they come from my heart, after all I guess that is what poetry is all about. Thanks. Dee~ Thank you Dee for being here. I appreciate your warm comments in more ways than I can express. I guess because my poetry doesn't come easy and it is nice to know that my words touch you in some small way. Thank you again Dee. Lyra~ Oh I'm a decent swimmer, but I'd say I'm better at treading water. I hope your weekend was a restful one. Love and hugs to you always Madame~ Titia~ Thank you ever so much for reading, it is truly a pleasant surprise to see you here. Thanks. Martie~ What a sweet and poetic reply, the place in heart where our peace lies, and by golly I think I've found it ...finally!! Thank you Martie~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love the beautiful title Lori.. Plunging to the bottom of the sea skimming the coral reefs avoiding the sharp edges that once threatened me. Loved it! ~Victoria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The title is special to me too! Thanks Victoria~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori, and you continue to amaze me with your amazing talent...this is a beautiful write, soft and yet powerful in it's message...wonderful write! you have a gift sweet lady and it comes shining through on these amazing pages of blue! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey Amy~ How do I thank you? I've recently started working out of the house so maybe that has something to do with jump starting my creative mind. I'm so glad you enjoy what I write and even more so for letting me know. Hugs Amy~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The sea is so inspirational, I feel this one. I am always renewed by the ocean. You write this beautifuly. Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Healing waters poetess..This glows in female fortitude and recovery of her spirit. YOU GO GIRL! I just had to say that~wink* Lovely..lovely poetry! Sincerely, Regina |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sandra~ I thank you for that. Right when I think I have milked the metaphor for everything it's worth, I am again inspired by the sea. Hugs to you~ Regina~ You're cute, I'm going girl! I am not about to drown beneath my sea, it is there where my safe harbor lies. Thank you Regina~ |
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