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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
You are not perfect I know this And age is something We are all clothed in Stillness does not lie On the surface Without all that is beneath Being calm So not the ideal Presented each day Of rosy cheeked youth Tan, trim, abbreviated You are not perfect Nor am I I know this For time has shown me Forfeiture of years does not bring Wisdom without mistakes also Becoming a mistress of your heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is one thing to admit to imperfection... something else again to be told we are imperfect... both cut... one just not as cruel as the other... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very true my friend... very true |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"I know this For time has shown me Forfeiture of years does not bring Wisdom without mistakes also Becoming a mistress of your heart" Yes, mistakes are the best teacher...and owning up to them is a wise thing, but not an easy thing. A thoughtful write, my friend Ron and well done! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Forfeiture of years does not bring Wisdom without mistakes also Becoming a mistress of your heart Love those lines. I actually stopped midway through reading this because it inspired in me a perfect thought. I think this is one of my favorites of yours. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thank You Martie... appreciate your thoughts here. Duncan my friend... I am always amazed you find anything I write of value...but it is always also a pleasant surprise |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
acceptance, what I see is acceptance, I love the 'still' verse, I love the whole thing, none of us are perfect, but to have someone love you anyway, that is what gives life sweetness |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And age is something We are all clothed in and yet it is strange how we often times don't see the age of ourselves...I remember once when I was thirty and still pretty much in great "bikini" shape..I bought something to wear that I thought I looked good in..another woman my age, came up to me and said, "what are you trying to do..look like a teenager"..and it ruined the outfit for me..I never wore it again... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Yes, no one is perfect but Him, and therefore we are all prone to mistakes, and mistakes are our mentors that later instruct us to learn from them and help us grow to understand others and offer them compassion! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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