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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-02-27 04:07 PM

Just a note…he said
Just a note…by my bed
Just a note, of heart, and hand
Just a note…and it led

My mind to thoughts of only him
My heart, taken by his whim
My love, to one so dear
That I shall always keep him here…

Just a note, speaking words
That for a moment, go unheard
Just a note…one little thing…
That gave my heart the song it sings…

~*~

Just a note, to soon be found
lying lonely on the ground...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-02-27 04:13 PM

a note to be remembered??

well done here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-27 04:15 PM

I wondered if you'd find it

Beautiful work!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-27 04:52 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sad but so very beautiful, sweet friend, I hope that these thoughts just waiting to be expressed will be shared when they can actually meet face-to-face in serendipity! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-02-27 05:02 PM

Soleil darling girl OH my stars this is so softly lovely. Hauntingly beautiful to me, it made me imagine for some unknown reason the Lady of Camelot. Wonderful writing darling girl as always you write wonderfully you are a real poet

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-27-2002 05:48 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-27 06:34 PM

Soleil, this is utterly haunting, beautifully done. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-02-27 07:54 PM

Oh boy I read this three ways three times and came up with three different scenarios, so that is a good thing right? In other words I really liked it three times.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2002-02-27 08:21 PM

I'm with Mysteria on this one.. Just a note of interest...

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-02-28 12:12 PM

certainly an intriguing response, soleil. I, too, can read it different ways. It was very uplifting and yet the ending brought it down to earth a bit. Good poetry can leave one wondering....thank you for joining me

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2002-03-27 06:10 PM

sounds like a blue note to me...

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

10 posted 2002-03-28 12:28 PM

Softly softly...

It's treading in on a very private moment...wonderful..

K

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