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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-03-27 10:42 AM

Green

He stood surrounded by
green
delights, testing [tasting] paths
previously untrod,
finding pleasure
through his
soles

palms have soles,
you know

he promised himself
to return

he intends
to return

he still has much to explore

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-03-27 10:44 AM

Interesting word play...one can take this in several directions... quite clever actually

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-03-27 12:59 PM

I took it at least 4 different ways ... combined them, smiled, and wrote this

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-27 03:10 PM

Deca this is an amazing write. I have been looking at it since you posted this morning...and I, as the others, see this many ways. Oh how I do love a poem that makes me stop and think and have another read! Well done my friend. Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-03-27 03:25 PM

i love thought-provoking poetry such as this! thanks for sharing

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-27 03:27 PM

OH yes...all of the things that can be read
into and from this provocative little piece
of poetic art....nicely written Deca...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-03-27 03:28 PM

palms have soles. . . yes. . . yes they do. . . and souls as well my friend. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-03-27 04:48 PM

enjoy

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-03-27 06:09 PM

Deca

You are such an artist of interest...enjoyed this!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-27 08:14 PM

(smiles) Wow, this is a wonderful poem that expresses this kind of sentiment so very well, sweet friend, you truly are a talented artist of wonderful words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

10 posted 2002-03-27 08:28 PM

Curious, indeed

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-03-28 12:17 PM

Intriguing....I, too, have read this several times, and each time has a different meaning...NICE!

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

12 posted 2002-03-29 03:04 PM

So very glad that all of you saw more than just what was on the surface...such is water....thank you all!

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