Open Poetry #19 |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Green He stood surrounded by green delights, testing [tasting] paths previously untrod, finding pleasure through his soles palms have soles, you know he promised himself to return he intends to return he still has much to explore |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Interesting word play...one can take this in several directions... quite clever actually |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I took it at least 4 different ways ... combined them, smiled, and wrote this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deca this is an amazing write. I have been looking at it since you posted this morning...and I, as the others, see this many ways. Oh how I do love a poem that makes me stop and think and have another read! Well done my friend. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i love thought-provoking poetry such as this! thanks for sharing |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH yes...all of the things that can be read into and from this provocative little piece of poetic art....nicely written Deca... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
palms have soles. . . yes. . . yes they do. . . and souls as well my friend. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca You are such an artist of interest...enjoyed this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, this is a wonderful poem that expresses this kind of sentiment so very well, sweet friend, you truly are a talented artist of wonderful words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Curious, indeed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Intriguing....I, too, have read this several times, and each time has a different meaning...NICE! Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
So very glad that all of you saw more than just what was on the surface...such is water....thank you all! |
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