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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-03-26 10:36 PM


3/26/2002

I look in your eyes
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who no longer
Sees me as a friend.

I look in you soul
To find I’m looking at
A stranger
Who’s soul
Has drifted away from
Me.

I look at your shadow
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’s shadow
Isn’t at my side.

I look in your heart
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’s heart
Doesn’t love me.

I look at your shoulders
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’s shoulders
Wont need me for
Crying on.

I look in your mind
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who’ll never
Again think about me.

I look at you
To see I’m looking at
A stranger who
I don’t know anymore.

By: Me

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1 posted 2002-03-26 10:43 PM


inspired..  to have a love or friend turn into a stranger is like a death march.  May a new shoulder turn up and may you be open to it,  ME
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-26 11:03 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo touching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to how you feel but I know there will always be a shoulder you can always rest on, for He is here for us all and He will always be here to ease our pain and comfort us when we need it the most! (big huggssssss) My heart goes out to you sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2002-03-27 02:11 AM


oh goodness, I do know what this is, I can so relate. Some become strangers indeed.
got2bme
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 5

4 posted 2002-07-01 10:11 PM


A friendship is something that should not be forgotten, and should be nurtured so it will continue to grow sometimes friends hurt one another but always should be forgiven. I believe that friends should always give one another a second chance! Nice poem, enjoyed very much!
              got2bme

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