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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-03-26 04:40 PM



9 plus 10 or
My Heart Is Touched By What I See


~~*~~


My eyes
won't change
the visions in my heart.

My heart
hears only
the words that reach my eyes.


~~*~~

M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2002-03-26 04:43 PM


That's pretty.

Nan

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2 posted 2002-03-26 05:16 PM


I like how you did this M.  very very nice.
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3 posted 2002-03-26 06:15 PM


this is quite lovely.

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-03-26 06:32 PM


thank you, Nan, Barry and Michael...
I was just thinking about how if I know you sight unseen...
and love you for who you are...then meeting will not change my opinion
when eyes touch eyes...

M

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5 posted 2002-03-26 07:38 PM




(smiles) Yes, yes, I love it, I too feel that it's the heart that matters most and it's not about looking eye to eye but rather reflecting the heart upon our sleeve upon the eyes we see from! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-03-27 05:07 PM


your words fill my heart
I drown in the limpid pools
of your knowing eyes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-03-28 02:28 PM


thanks Noah..and


I..you always share a part of you, so  romantic...makes one wonder if in real it would be the same...

~smiling a thank you
M

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