Open Poetry #19 |
Lover Of The Night (an oldie from the uninspired heart) |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lover of the night am I, yet night has little joyous mean when arms reach out to hold a vacant dream and lips which long to kiss remain firmly ensconced in lines of aloneness and despair created from his hurtful lies. Lover of the night am I, though tears escape my frozen lids while aching heart so nearly broken barely beats alive within and impossible realities abort all thoughts of any moments peaceful rest and love that still is not Yet still the night is comforting, a velvet cloak to hide behind to soften bitter edge of day as sunset dusk will shadows rise to open doors of promised love of which the mind will not let go though signs of future hope continue to say no. Lover of the night am I holding dreams that never die. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I don't know that I've read this one Sandra. . . the flow here is just amazing. . . and yes, the feelings are all too real. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perhaps a repost, but I do not remember reading it... I know I enjoyed it this time... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Some sad images in this one. I enjoyed it. Nan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yet still the night is comforting, a velvet cloak to hide behind Yes, the night's darkness is comforting..and holding onto memories is not a bad thing...while we wait for the new.. hugss M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, beautifully sad but brilliantly composed....there is hope...surely there is. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your tears, for I know this feeling of emptiness so well but now that I am feeling love for the first time, I know there is hope always, and you will soon be swonning in the night with love close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good expression of feelings from your uninspired heart...may your heart find good reason to be inspired...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lover of the night am I holding dreams that never die. Ain’t it the truth, some just never die do they? A touching piece you’ve written Sandra. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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