Open Poetry #19 |
Reminded of You |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It has been years And last night I dreamed of you. Not the you I knew then, When we were young Foolishly hiding away each chance That was or was not there To explore the reality of intimacy In our own selfish ways While we ran from the truths That we were just young Just wanting to be whole No, not that you But an older one Wiser, for all you did was hug me Ask me how I’d been Without the hesitant pause Of do I dare? And smiled Perhaps it means I have let that childhood love go Knowing we have both grown older Have lived separate lives Yet… I still remember the flush of your cheek And short breathed sighs The hug was enough To let me know I still cared |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"I have let that childhood love go Knowing we have both grown older Yet ...I still remember the flush of your cheek And short breathed sighs" Perfect! A memory that everyone should retain of some One special.... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I've come to this place, after passion and intensity...sometimes a hug, does speak well of who we have become. It's a little too early for me to really delve into this one, I will save it for later. There is much about it that touched me. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron "The hug was enough To let me know I still cared" I love the way you turned this hug around at the end. Much enjoyed! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know this you've put into words what I couldn't. and from a female point of view, it feels the same when the dream is of a man... I'm keeping this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, I too always feel just hugging a close friend always comforts me so very much and makes me feel there is one close friend that will always be close to my heart! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Someone asked about you... and it made me miss you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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