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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-03-26 09:20 AM

A Rosebud

I see the flower of beauty in the deepness of your eye
Unfolding softly to the starry distance of the sky
As though the night surrounds you with a peace you’ve never known
For love has touched a rosebud, now the rose is fully grown

I see the flush of beauty in the shadows of your face
And the sculptor of a woman in a fragile veil of lace
So strange the apparition of a child in disguise
A fragrant little rosebud in the deepness of her eyes

The secrets now have been disclosed, your heart has been embraced
By someone dear who saw beyond the beauty of your face
The rosebud has unfolded for the sunlight to consume
But now your beauty sparkles in the whiteness of the moon

And all the stars have recognized
The depth of grace within your eyes

Elizabeth Santos
For my daughter, Christina

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-03-26 09:26 AM

Liz

She will love the beauty with which you see and write of her. Just so lovely!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-03-26 10:07 AM

LizzieDear~

'The rosebud has unfolded for the sunlight to consume'

Such delicately lovely thoughts for Christina~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2002-03-26 11:23 AM

What a soft, beautiful tribute for your daughter.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-03-26 11:47 AM

What a lovely image.

Nan

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-03-26 03:01 PM

unfolding like the softest of those buds. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2002-03-26 03:03 PM

Ah, good...before I scrolled to the end of this, I had thought This should be given to a daughter... and you did...Should she ever know what was in your heart for her, this tells it quite well...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-26 07:57 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just know Christina is going to love this and cherish this with all her heart, for you will always be the rose of her heart! (kiss on cheek) May your love together grow everyday, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2002-03-27 10:30 AM

I would give anything to have been seen this way even once. *S*

This is so beautiful, Elizabeth... perfect poetry but perhaps more important... abundant love and pride shining brightly enough to bring tears to my eyes. *S*

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