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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-03-26 06:09 AM

Let’s swim the water and hear the birds sing,
Come by the river to feel this love sting.
A few steps only, not more and none less,
Come let’s be silly, enjoy the romance.

Let’s be Jack and Jill, for moment or two,
To climb up the hill and drink what love brews.
Come let’s take the trip, have fun and be crazed,
With a few small sips, not more and not less.

Come,
Come along with me...
Share,
Share this swim with me...

Come near the river to see the birds swing,
Let’s drink the water, and make our love sing.
In few tiny steps, one by one or two,
May our lives take shape, soon it shall be through.

Let’s swim the water, swim across the lake,
To disappear, into the daybreak.
Come along my dear, no need to shiver,
Let’s make our love clear, enjoy this fever.

Come let’s take the ride, to the other side,
Ride over the tide, with love as our guide.
Let’s drink the water, and hear the birds sing,
Love songs that matter, those wonderful things.

Come,
Come along with me
Sing,
Sing this song with me

....

just a drifter's version of a love song... sing-a-long...

Regards to all,
sudhir

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (03-26-2002 06:11 AM).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-03-26 06:19 AM

"Come let’s take the ride, to the other side,
Ride over the tide, with love as our guide."

Singing right along with you here Sudhir ... wonderful sentiments, I'd love to hear a melody to accompany this lovely piece, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-03-26 09:06 AM

Sudhir~
Such a lovely, uplifting piece you've shared today~
Thank you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-03-26 09:12 AM

Sing along with Sudhir

Love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2002-03-26 09:57 AM

I like this very much, Sudhir... beautiful!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-03-26 02:57 PM

I can hear it my friend. . . kind of a catchy tune. . . with just a bit of sadness. . .

well done. . .

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2002-03-26 04:50 PM

I like this one. It swings.

Nan

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-03-26 04:54 PM

I love this..I was thinking this morning of the song...

da da da da da....Come out and play with me.. and I can't remember the beginning of it... must be one of those senior moments someone mentioned on here recently...
*s

M

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-26 05:59 PM

Sung eloquently...so very well...nicely done!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-26 07:40 PM

YAY!!! Oohhhhhhhhh...I love long songs, this is such a gorgeous sing-along that would make excellent music! (big hugggssssss) I would love to hear you sing this, this made me sigh reading it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-03-26 08:30 PM

Sudhir! This is beautiful...enjoyed so much!
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2002-03-27 05:21 AM

Thank you all so very much... really appreciated...

And... I really can NOT sing... so it is better that some one else does the singing...

Regards,
sudhir

Spirit Of Twilight
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since 2002-01-11

Posts 116
India

12 posted 2002-03-27 07:30 AM

Sudhir,
First of all, Namaste...I'd love to sing this beautiful poem...it's so sweet and romantic.
Thanks for sharing it!
Neha

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

13 posted 2002-03-28 07:18 AM

Namaste Neha, Thanks a lot for coming by...

regards to you,
sudhir

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