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sing-a-long-love-song |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Let’s swim the water and hear the birds sing, Come by the river to feel this love sting. A few steps only, not more and none less, Come let’s be silly, enjoy the romance. Let’s be Jack and Jill, for moment or two, To climb up the hill and drink what love brews. Come let’s take the trip, have fun and be crazed, With a few small sips, not more and not less. Come, Come along with me... Share, Share this swim with me... Come near the river to see the birds swing, Let’s drink the water, and make our love sing. In few tiny steps, one by one or two, May our lives take shape, soon it shall be through. Let’s swim the water, swim across the lake, To disappear, into the daybreak. Come along my dear, no need to shiver, Let’s make our love clear, enjoy this fever. Come let’s take the ride, to the other side, Ride over the tide, with love as our guide. Let’s drink the water, and hear the birds sing, Love songs that matter, those wonderful things. Come, Come along with me Sing, Sing this song with me .... just a drifter's version of a love song... sing-a-long...  Regards to all, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (03-26-2002 06:11 AM).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Come let’s take the ride, to the other side, Ride over the tide, with love as our guide." Singing right along with you here Sudhir ... wonderful sentiments, I'd love to hear a melody to accompany this lovely piece, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Such a lovely, uplifting piece you've shared today~ Thank you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sing along with Sudhir Love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Sudhir... beautiful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear it my friend. . . kind of a catchy tune. . . with just a bit of sadness. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like this one. It swings. Nan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this..I was thinking this morning of the song... da da da da da....Come out and play with me.. and I can't remember the beginning of it... must be one of those senior moments someone mentioned on here recently... *s M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sung eloquently...so very well...nicely done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oohhhhhhhhh...I love long songs, this is such a gorgeous sing-along that would make excellent music! (big hugggssssss) I would love to hear you sing this, this made me sigh reading it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sudhir! This is beautiful...enjoyed so much! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much... really appreciated... And... I really can NOT sing... so it is better that some one else does the singing... Regards, sudhir |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Sudhir, First of all, Namaste...I'd love to sing this beautiful poem...it's so sweet and romantic. Thanks for sharing it! Neha |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Namaste Neha, Thanks a lot for coming by... regards to you, sudhir |
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