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Hip-Hop ... The Rhyme Won't Stop
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Hip-Hop ... The Rhyme Won't Stop |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Hip-Hop~ The Rhyme Won't Stop ~*Marge Tindal*~  Once upon new Easter Day time I found a bunny hopping rhyme Hippity-Hoppity with the beat Showing kids new poetry treat He hid words in grass so tall So they'd never find them all Then with basket held in hand Merry kids go search the land Hunting different on this day Words when found kid must say Must use it in a poetic rhyme Not just once - but two times Relating it to new Easter Day Hear what children had to say E-G-G-S signify new B-I-R-T-H So He'd preach peace on earth S-I-N is never done to friend Turn thy cheek time and again F-O-R-G-I-V-E we all shall do As the Lord hath forgiven you R-I-S-E-N up to Heaven's door His promise to us forevermore Now says Easter Bunny sweetly Eat your chocolate egg neatly |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is such a cute Easter poem!  sky |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Marge! I must give this to Nicole, she'll absolutely love it! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this  Easter is a happy time for me. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I have an egg that says Marge on one side and friend on the other. Hugs! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is charming and also tells some of the things Easter means. I'm sure children will love it as well as adults. I'll show it to Ron tomorrow. Great job. Betty Lou Hebert |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
this is so cute and interesting, yet informative at the same time! I shall be forwarding this to my nieces and nephews!! ~ cottage |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful combination of a cute "symbol" ... with the true message and meaning behind the tradition. Lovely Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I love it,  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I think mayhaps it DOES da-DUM though...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks dear friends - I say to you Share it as it is intended you, do There upon the new Easter Day dawn Find chocolate eggs upon your lawn It is a fun,fun day to be a poet ! *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl this is so very very cute, in your own inimitable way you have given the true Easter message in a way that children can relate to. I like this a whole lot. You are an excellent writer you know. Wonderful writing, and Easter HUG's to you and yours. happy Easter   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this so very much, Marge... wonderful weaving of whimsy and wisdom. *S* |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Now I really feel like Easter, bunnies and all, thanks for sharing Marge. floria Floria |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is sweet Nan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Such a basket filled with friends Greet of day on gently-blown wind May you find new word in egg-play Scrambling a new friendship today *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yep, I think this is a keeper....and the kids... WILL LOVE IT!!!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful easter poem, Marge! I love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sharing the poem with friends and kids Is about the greatest thing I ever did Painted a glowing smile upon this face That nothing under that sun will erase ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 -ing the Easter Basket of rhyme~~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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