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will you try |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Can you feel the tension wanting to break like a wave washing over a sandy deserted beach where no one has ever left their footprints Shall we go where it is not beyond our reach to gather this life before us as we settle down to weave the future I know that if I try I can remove my misgivings like a tattered old coat and cast it aside when the warmth of spring fills me again Will you come and help me along this path that we are blazing into the wilds of unexplored life will you try? |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
James, if someone had written me a poem like this I would definitely try!  sky |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
thank you skyshine-always nice to hear from a sunny person |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what wonderful words from a wonderful heart! Thanks for the read. |
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