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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-03-19 01:43 PM

Twinkle is the shimmering shine
In the eye of the ocean far,
When lucid breeze unveils the shroud
Lighting smiles on the face of stars.

Silken beams of white virgin light
Graze upon fertile green meadows,
As my eyes rest upon a sight
Of goblins dancing in shadows.

Neither drunk nor insane was I-
To see mermaids rise from the sea,
Such visions in a spring night that
I saw crystal ships ply by me.

Call me a mad man or a fake,
But these visions I did not make,
Know that strange things do form a crowd
When moonlight slivers through high clouds.

just having some fun with good ole rhyme...

and peeping into the house to see my friendly family...

regards to all
sudhir

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-03-19 02:54 PM

Hi Sudhir

Glad to see you...I enjoyed this..especially the last stanza!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-19 03:07 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and I believe you with all my heart for I always love to dream sooooooo much, mermaids are my favorite things of all, they are sooooooo beautiful! (big hugggsssss) May you always dream happily away, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-03-19 03:18 PM

thank you for peeking in today my friend. . . this is well done. . . and well said. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Accordionmaid
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since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

4 posted 2002-03-19 03:29 PM

...goblins dancing in shadows...but, you didn't really see them..Just having some fun with rhyme? Hmmm. Maybe I am the only one who sees them. Anyway, loved your poem.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-19 03:46 PM

Hello Sudhir! So nice to see you here again!
Loved this piece...and, please come back more often.

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2002-03-22 04:48 AM

Thank you all very much...

Regards,
sudhir

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-03-22 07:06 AM

Hey, come back! I'm not done reading your poetry yet...bring more back with you!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-03-22 08:54 AM

Sudhir~
Can't resist a good poem, from a good friend, about the moonlight~
Nicely done.
Be well and happy my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2002-03-25 03:01 AM

Thank you Karilea and Marge, my friends... very much...

Regards to you,
Sudhir

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2002-03-25 02:01 PM

Hi hi
I loved this, Sir Poet!

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2002-03-26 02:31 AM

Thank you so very much...

Regards,
Sudhir

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