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TriXter
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0 posted 2002-03-25 07:15 PM



I know that i have been posting almost everyday since i joined, and it might get tireing but i have a lot of words to share so please bare with me while i get them out of my system

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                          Star Gazer

I’m in love with you from afar,
In the sky, you are my brightest star.
The feeling I have now it is a crush, so it would seem,
So the feelings that would come with loving you,
I can’t begin to dream.

You’re love would take me up off the ground,
And all words exchanged would only be the sweetest sound.
All these poems I write are straight from my heart,
I will sweep you off you’re feet, love you everyday and every night,
In the cold dark world, I can be you’re light.

So let me hold you, let me love you
In hopes that you only feel the same way too.
From a hopeless romantic these words do flow,
And all of my love, I do show,
From a star gazer.


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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-03-25 07:24 PM


It is quite acceptable to post every day...
I doubt that you will overload our eyeballs
with your poetry...

Keep writing, expressing...sit back and
enjoy the poetic ride...

BTW...nice words of love...I am sure that
who they are meant for...will enjoy them..

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-25 07:25 PM


"So let me hold you, let me love you
In hopes that you only feel the same way too.
From a hopeless romantic these words do flow,
And all of my love, I do show,
From a star gazer."




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever share the heavens and stargaze loves dreams forever together! (smiles) We're all sooooo happy you are sharing your words with us frequently, you have such amazing talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-25 07:34 PM


awww very pretty, show it to your girl, she will absoulely adore it as i did.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-03-25 09:16 PM


Very nice Star Gazer....James
Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-03-25 10:10 PM


You're about two for one in responses to posting...not so bad!  I get just as much enjoyment out of reading as I do posting, and I think you're in great company...as you can see, there's a whole BUNCH of us who feel like we have something to say!  Keep reading!  Keep writing!


TriXter
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6 posted 2002-03-26 06:25 PM


I would just like to say thanks for the encouragement and nice comments, I took youre advice Rose and slipped it into her locker today i hope she enjoyed the words written much as i enjoyed writing them.
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