Open Poetry #19 |
Opening A Butterfly & Daughter...What You Mean To Me (My 3000th post!) |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Opening of A Butterfly AMK 3/25/02 Dedicated to Jena Before you came into my life, I was but a mere caterpillar Protected by silk woven lace Enclosed in my private space was the only place I found peace Until I was met by your love and beautiful grace Inside my silken hideaway, I hid hoping to heal Burned from past loves, I was but a mere shell of the former me Scared to try again, I was afraid once again it wouldn't be real I had convinced myself, that this was for the best, here I would stay for eternity Then you came along, unlike any other person I've ever known You showed me how true love could be; you went at my pace, nice and slow Slowly I noticed changes inside my warm secure home; it seemed love had grown How could this be though? I had kept myself a secret, so how could someone know You wouldn't accept no for an answer, showing me everyday that you cared At first I wanted to fight you, my scars too ugly for you to see But then slowly I felt something stirring, I felt my heart opening and beginning to share Was this love I had found...I wasn't sure, I just knew I never felt so free Then I felt my cocoon begin to open some more, and a strange sensation My wings began to expand, but how could this be? I felt my heart quicken with sudden anticipation As I felt the first stirrings of love beginning to enter me Patiently you waited by my side, never once did you turn your back or give up on me You turned the skies that had become blackened into those of cornflower blue I felt my wings strengthen and begin to flutter, light and free That's when I realized beyond any doubt, I had fallen in love with you Thank you is inadequate for the happiness to my life you bring Your love is something like pure magic; it's something I sometimes have to pinch myself to believe You fill me with a love and joy I've never known...you make my heart sing This is beyond my wildest dreams, or anything I could have conceived I smile as I think of you my Angel, and let out a loving sigh Thank you for helping to open the soul of a butterfly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Daughter (What You Mean to Me) AMK 3/25/02 So many times I sit on the phone talking to your Mom When I hear your squeal of delight You have the cutest laugh I've ever heard You fill our life with joy and light Now you do try her patience This we all know is true But you are so blessed little one We all love you Though I could never be your Mom Not in any true sense of the word you see I still love you very much You are so precious to me I hope that you understand this union That me and your Mother share We love each other very much And for you we will always care I can't wait to be a part of your family Always wanted a little girl, but you are more wonderful than my wildest dreams As you sarcastically speak your mind Only four years old, as you let out your high pitched screams I just want you to know That you are an angel sent from above And as long as I am nearby you and your Mom You will always be surrounded with love. "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-25-2002 05:15 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ami darling lil sis of my heart OH MY this is so beautiful both amazing stunning examples of your spirit in form. You darling girl really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills. 3 0 0 0 posts well done Amy This has been a hectic period for you, and I simply can’t tell you how awed and proud I am of you. You’ve shown such courage, so much determination. When fate seems to be throwing its worst at you, you’ve never given up, you’ve triumphed over adversity, over heartbreak, over misfortune. Never blaming anyone else but doing all you can to surmount difficulties and rise up again. I love you lil sis of my heart and this is a wonderful landmark post Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very beautiful and tender dedication... Save it for when she can read it...it is a treasure... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Aimster its always good to see you congrats on the post thing you are a blessing to this place |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, loving and sweet words, Amy...Congratulaions on your milestone! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Ooohhhhhh...I just got in here for the first time today and I am so happy to find this, your love for your daughter shines in your words and I wish you two to share a lifetime of happiness together! (smiles) GOD BLESS YOU, SWEET FRIEND, CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000, WE ALL LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A marvelous tribute on a very special occasion! Congratulations! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
CONGRATULATIONS Amy ...on the big 3000 hugs.. ~Victoria
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Only love can unfold like this... beautiful write of your heart Amy-girl, and a perfect pair to mark your milestione with. Thank you for the encouraging, supportive, and generous replies to my work that make up some of this number...seems like a lifetime ago when you used to come in DP and spread your sunshine. We can only grow, right? Heres to all your butterfly dreams coming true Amy. heart-hugs sunshine girlie Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, These are just beautiful Jena won't be able to speak after she read these Congrats on your 3,000 (I'm slowly getting there lol) I hope to see much much more. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
H Amy, this is beautiful. And congrats on the 3000th. Sandra |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely fantastic writing, Amy, the way you unravel your life all the way through the metamorphasis of rebirth.....congratulations to you, sweet, talented Amy |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Amy aunt / lil sis/ cousin this is a wonderful landmark post, I’ll take for ever to get there. What a wonderful way you’ve shown your journey to who you are. Excellent spinning of your cocoon and transformation you are a beautiful butterfly 3000 Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mushy, dearest sis of mine...you had to be the first to reply didn't you, and start out this list of fine writers. now you know your beautiful reply made me cry tears of happiness don't you? i don't even know what to say. your support, love, and encouragement has meant more to me than you will ever know! you truly are an Angel and a blessing to my life! I love you very much, and though we may not be related, you are my sister...you are my family. thank you very very much for such a gorgeous reply. my words inadequately thank you...but please know that you humble me... love you! amy Magnus, thank you for your kind reply sir. And yes I shall save this for her to read some day when she is older... take care. Walt, good to see you as well. and thank you for your lovely comment. you too are a blessing to these pages of blue. Martie, Thank you sweetie for such a beautiful reply and for taking the time to stop by. take care. "you can't stop |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Noah, Gosh you're such a doll. You really know how to make a woman smile. Thank you sweetie for your always loving kind words...you bring sunshine wherever you are! Sunshine, thank you for the "marvelous". Hope that you are well. Take care. Victoria, hugs back to you and thank you for the congratuations. take care. marvelous to get such a loving reply from you. take care. JM, as always its an honor to get a reply from you...you are forever welcome for anything i've done or said to you...you truly have the heart of a butterfly though you think of a moth, and to me you will always be special. me loves you very much! thank you for everything! Tara, Hi sweets. Thanks so much for your loving reply. I emailed these to J today, and she just responded back to me...she loves them...I am going to frame them for her and send them or i might wait just wait till I see her next month Love ya! Sandra, Thank you for your beautiful reply, and for taking the time to read. it's much appreciated. take care. "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-26-2002 11:28 AM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
bal, thank you for your wonderful encouraging reply...i liked how you viewed my work. it made me smile. you truly are a prince take care. Krissy, sweet sis/niece, awww aren't you such a sweetie! thank you for your beautiful heartfelt reply. you and your mom are the shining stars in my life. i humbly thank you both! as for taking you forever to get here.. i think not...you post and reply quite a bit, sprinkling your love and good cheer everywhere you go. take care sweets. Thank you all for your wonderful replies. As always, they mean the world to me. I cherish you all! God bless. Love, Amy "you can't stop |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, Amy-girlie, it's true, you improve every time I read you. Both poems are heart-warming and wonderfully displayed. You should be very proud of these~ Happy 3000 smiles! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (03-26-2002 01:00 PM).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This was an awesome way to express your path to love, true love, and I am sure she will be overwhelmed with all that love as she read it. Very heartwarming! And, that precious little girl will look back and see all the love you gave her, and will continue to walk through life carrying love beyond belief. You have a loving heart, one that deserves, all of what heaven has to offer. Great writes here. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mel, Thank you sweetie for your beautiful reply. I strive everyday to become a better and better writer...to hear someone actually say that I'm improving though is the highest compliment to me! I humbly thank you! Take care. Amy Sauni, Thank you so much for your thoughtful and heartfelt reply. Yes I have found the path of true love and I hope that it continues to last this good! As for Joely (that is her name) I pray that she realises how much we love her! We are very lucky to have such an Angel in our lives. Thank you once again! God bless! Take care. Amy "you can't stop |
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