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Breast of a Moonlight Affair
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Breast of a Moonlight Affair |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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We dance in the shadows of the moon when passion captivates the night air sweet honeysuckle drips with fragrance cascading the breast of a moonlight affair upon the doorway of night, a portiere wings of gossamer touch bodies bare enshrouded with sheerness, but unaware passionate fruit, we harvest and share peeling tenderly moonbeams with care beneath the raw pulp of sweet passion you lead galently to the spiral staircase step by step to the tango of seduction we drink the sweet wine of fruition spinning upon the dance floor of love "Silence is a friend who will never betray." Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-17-2002 05:16 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) ay your heart forever dance tango with his in eternal love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like fun...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria, So...they don't all come in pairs?  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hmmm I love that spiraling staircase it adds to the elegance and lends itself to the introspection of your words. Very nice, once again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria, this is soooo lovely and very tastefully penned. Enjoyed much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Victoria, this is very, very beautiful. You are a wonderful writer. Keep 'em coming. I love 'em! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah..thank you dear noah...love hearing from you ..hugss james..thank you..yes im sure you have danced before  larry..yes on a woman they do ha..but when you are talking about a hill etc..i believe you say breast..thank you Larry.. ms.serenade...thank you..i think spiralstairs are so pretty..appreciate your comments hugs nancy..i try to tastefully write about passion..thanks for your sweet comment hugss newell thank you so much..glad you enjoyed..and thank you for peeking in |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Words so enchanting and creativly arranged Romatic at it's best, bravo The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vic....don't ever think, for even a moment, that you are not good at writing this... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully romantic, Victoria... I love the way you use the moonlight to enhance the romance here  I especially love these words We dance in the shadows of the moon when passion captivates the night air sweet honeysuckle drips with fragrance cascading the breast of a moonlight affair copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Helmut..thank you for taking time to visit ..happy you enjoyed my words.. barry..thank you..i enjoy writing all kinds of poetry..i seem to change my style a little as the years go by.. madame..thank you sweet one..hugss always appreciate your comments |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm I think your dance is more fun than mine. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
belly dancing is more fun im sure haa..thanks sandra hon ...hugs ~Vic |
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