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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Commonalities Wayward, skyward be, the common mass, the lad and lass Populace seen with little, but yea, extremes they do so clash But of this, the general public, be I but one of they And know the proletariat indeed shall have his say For great counsel, this, the working class shall give For, most often asked, is how to live, and yet let live? Plebian, these citizenry might oh so very well be… But there be music in grassy root… If one could just but see… They walk a gentle sphere, these multitudes that roam They know well then, where there is hearth, and therein, their home They close their rank and file, to care for one on one They only hope tomorrow will yet again bring sun These people, this humanity, this, the working classes They oft look in mirrored glass at their many masses ~*~ circa 01.29.01 revised 02.16.02 KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-16-2002 08:49 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey, Hey, sociology and poetry combined. I guess this is a case of art imitating life. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Karilea, I know just how you feel, I feel sometimes the working class is treated like plebeians sometimes and deserve much more respect from those they work for in helping bring new innovations and hope to the world! (kiss on cheek) So very well said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And in a sonnet too! You acheived a certain voice in this, that I thought lent itself to the sonnet form very nicely! I'll be looking at this one again. enjoyed much. |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Sunshine; What incredible writing..I loved this. Wanda |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, what Kethry said, especially. Well done! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The mirrored glass tells all.. to those who take time to look...Well done, Sunshiny one... |
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