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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-03-24 10:10 PM


Laying in clover, truly touching all over...
Cool moonlight, to dreamers, seen flown down in streamers
like love that does hover between one another
among the clover green... This sweet, sensual scene
is every and truly, by no means unruly,
a love unbeholden turned green into golden,
the couple to King and Queen... That's what true love means.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-03-24 10:38 PM



Hear hear!  
Here is to the Dreamers!  
Long live the King & Queen!

Victoria
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2 posted 2002-03-24 10:46 PM


a fun read..loved the rhyme and form..

          ~Victoria~

        

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-03-24 10:55 PM


Beautifully done...love the flow to this..

Hail to the King and Queen!

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-03-24 11:48 PM


Very cool...I liked this alot!
Dulcinea
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5 posted 2002-03-25 12:09 PM


Sometimes dreams do come true, even forgotten ones! Very nicely done!
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