Open Poetry #19 |
- We Are Gemini - |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
We are Gemini I know your eyes glisten of chestnut from the taste of your tears that fall from stars of honeyed smiles woven in the knit of sun in set. For, we are gemini, souls of twin flames through the ying and yang of life ever burning in the moon of light that sparks our breath's remember. At the kiss of kindred release, the promise of your lips pumps my beat of heart to beautifully breathless. Your fingers trace in explore 'round my locks dipped in caramel curls, adorning them in a crown of angels born of your dreams of another time, another place when the Lord first weeped us in blend to melt as one 'neath the blaze of heaven's sun. In sacred chant on feathered laughter we gather the ancient winds through skin's caress with hands of tender in bliss of chills beeding down spines through soar of ecstasy entwine. The safety of your arms surrenders my lids of eyes to close, though I still see the bloom of fields in everafter's embrace that beckons my feet to come alive in dance across the ballroom of sky. Oh, enraptured am I of you as eve carries us away to re-birth of destined day in gaze upon hues of dawn making love across the horizon. For, we are gemini, souls of twin flames through the ying and yang of life ever burning in tomorrow's forever. By Melissa P. Monette |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What beautiful writing, Melissa! This is special... You be yang and I'll be ying Together we'll do everything.. Or are you ying which makes me yang I tell you - I don't give a dang! You be you and I'll be me And we will both live happily |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Sighing dreamily... this is beautifully worded! Fabulous writing! Love, Bonnie |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh, enraptured am I of you as eve carries us away to re-birth of destined day in gaze upon hues of dawn This is so very beautiful, Melissa copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is how it should be written....just like this poem....awesome, Melissa... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I know I’ve said it before, but you do write of love so beautifully. This is another wonderful piece from your never ending pen of wonders. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, You've done it again, this is beautiful and so unique |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, indeed! You've taken the Gemini premise to new heights Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mel, as always beautifully constructed! this was just such a lovely poem. i love your images in this and your vocabulary superb! take care my friend amy "you can't stop |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
inded we are geminies because i am one and i am also a native american i seen tha pic on the poem. you know geminies are unpredictable we have split personallitties and you never know when we are goin to turn. geminies are also with pisces the are similar to the same you know that. the only thing diffrent is one is fish and other is human. if you would liek to know more about zodiac let mek now i studdy science a lot on my spare time i enjoy it and i also enjoyed ur read. keep'em commin. awrigh have fun. love kevin reid aka dunphy 18 m assachusetts |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Melissa, this is gorgeous. Wonderfully written. love these lines. "Oh, enraptured am I of you as eve carries us away to re-birth of destined day in gaze upon hues of dawn making love across the horizon." beautiful. floria Floria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . now this is inspired writing Melissa. . . truly a remarkable poem. . . wonderfully done from the Queen of Romance. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and him forever be ying and ylang of each others hearts and melt together in true loves eternal happiness, sweet friend, this is lovely! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh..I run out of words to express how much I love your writing. This is outstandingly beautiful. We are Gemini..such a nice sound to that. Sandra |
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