Open Poetry #19 |
Special one |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Special one (Dedicated to Neha) I hear a sweet and mellow voice God’s lovely, lovely choice a little angel chirping from her window sill sending heavenly music into my ears a voice so sweet and pure. I can almost see her beauty her hair, so fair adore her face and eyes so bright sparkling just right as she searches and calls for a special someone to share her life. I see her young bright eyes why are they filled with tears? why is her heart so heavy? as she looks and calls for a special one? With a voice so heavenly her melody pierces my soul my heart beats wildly as she calls my frequency is she calling me? I feel the urge to answer to return her sweet love call here I am for you, Sweetheart open your arms I need your love like you need mine be my wine. Oh how I thirst for her sweet young loving wine and if it were not for Father Time I would be hers and she would be mine as I feel her sweet, young spirit calling me I want to love her through eternity. But I am old, not young in years and I am sad and full of tears and my last page may soon turn as my heavy heart burns for she is a very special one. So alas I must pass I cannot be her fellow she cannot be my lass she must still perch on her windowsill and sing and wait for God to send a mate someone young to share her life to be her special one. Copyright, Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 26, 2001 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautifully heartfelt, I too know how she feels for I am in love with the most beautiful girl, Joanna, yet I live so far away from her and dream that soon God can help me find away to meet her and I can be hers forever! (sigh) This is soooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I know she will cherish these words with all her heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy I love this utterly utterly, the flow of this is utterly divine and the flow is wonderful. It has some of the best lines ever, and it’s so descriptive of a young bird singing her mating song and waiting for her ideal mate. Excellent writing darling man excellent Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How sweetly you express the sentiments of the heart...forever young my friend. She is touched I'm sure. Enjoy reading your work and have learned much from you... both style and friendship. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for you loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl. How sweet are your words. You write with the pen of an angel. And your words keep me soaring in the heavens. Thank you for flying my way. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
ThisDiamond, you, yourself, are indeed a rare precious gem. A jewel of priceless value. Thank you for your very kind compliments. I am humbled and honored. ((ThisDiamond)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
vandana, thank you for your kind thought. ((vandana)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-24-2002 05:46 PM).] |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful and beautiful poem with us Andrew: Huggle Administrator |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
But I am old, not young in years and I am sad and full of tears and my last page may soon turn as my heavy heart burns for she is a very special one. This makes me sad, Newell...I sure hope that your last page doesn't turn for a very long time. Beautifully written copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marshalzu, thank you for your very kind thoughts. ((Marshalzu)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lyra, I plan to be around a long, long time helping you feed those chipmunks! This was written for a "sister" of mine in India. It is a poem answer to a beautiful poem of hers, calling as a bird trilling for a mate. I couldn't resist answering her, poetically. We do love each other very much as siblings. I'm hoping that she moves to Canada soon, and we can visit and play and swing together. Wheeee! ((Lyra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Newell, I want to thank you again for this poem...and indeed I am very lucky to have you as my brother..my knight. Can't say more...but this poem always touches my soul ever so deeply. I love you, Big Brother..thank you! Neha |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
You're welcome, Neha. ((Neha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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