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strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

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0 posted 2002-03-24 11:41 AM

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On His back was placed a cross
Heavy with the sins of man.
He was made to pay the cost
As was written in the plan.
Beaten, whipped, scourged, deserted.
He alone bore all the pain.
From the minds of men perverted.
Happy not till He was slain.
Placed a thorned crown on His head.
Pounded nails in hands and feet.
Put Him in the tomb when dead,
Thinking now their job complete.
Voice from heaven "It is done,
This is My Beloved Son"

Floria

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-24 11:45 AM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Floria, it always makes me cry just envisioning all the anguish He had to endure but I also cry tears of hope knowing that He is His son, and in spite of this misery, He chose by free-will to do this to save us all and offer His love in exchange! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a powerfully captivating Easter poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-24 11:46 AM

Floria,
An excellent write. Thank you

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-03-24 11:46 AM

Wonderful Easter poem, floria. Thanks for sharing.

((floria))
-newell

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-03-24 11:51 AM

Noah thank you so much for your kindness. floria

Seymour thank you much. floria

Newell thanks for your reply. floria

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-24 01:02 PM

Floria darling girl Oh my this is spectacular a wonderful start to this momentous week, from Palm Sunday through to Easter Sunday it is a week when our minds and prayers to him seem to be especially poignant.

This is a wonderful poetic depiction of the Lords passion. It truly is a beautiful piece of writing and I love it. Utterly utterly excellent

Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-03-24 01:03 PM

A perfect write, Floria...thank you!

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

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USA

7 posted 2002-03-24 01:07 PM

Floria...the story is never-ending
as we are the pages that flutter, written
and our souls are the chapters, written to be.
Lucky is the man who believes
blessed are those who have seen His Future.

wonderful write,
tSR

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

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8 posted 2002-03-24 01:40 PM

Marsha dear thank you always for your kind words. I am glad this was inspiring to you. floria

Sunshine, thank you so much for reading and replying. floria

Shadow, thank you so much, this is my favorite holiday even more so than Christmas which has turned into such a comercialized holiday. I am happy you liked it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

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Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-03-24 07:12 PM

lovely floria dear..so appropriate too..thank you for posting your wonderful words..hugss

~Victoria

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

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Michigan

10 posted 2002-03-24 07:14 PM

Amazingly beautiful, Floria...
Though I am not a Christian...I still think it is a touching story and a beautiful poem.

Happy Easter!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-03-24 07:19 PM

A beautiful and perfectly penned testament to
HIM!...Nice Floria..

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-03-24 08:01 PM

Voice from heaven "It is done."
"This is my beloved Son."
Enjoyed this fabulous piece of writing...especailly the last two lines...very touching...you have really portrayed the emotional substance of the Crucifixion...one of my favorites...James

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

13 posted 2002-03-24 10:35 PM

Your faith is shining brightly, miss

Carolina
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Myrtle Beach, SC

14 posted 2002-03-25 09:06 AM

This is beautiful!! For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten Son. That whosoever believes in Him, shall not perish but have everlasting life. God Bless you for reminding us of the Greatest Gift.

Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2002-03-28 06:58 PM

Lovely!! I am sorry I am late responding to this...be well Peace to you HUGSSSS

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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