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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-03-24 12:55 PM

I love the guy
in the suit & tie
who at the end of the day
has lost his smile
but I have the knack
of getting it back
by doing
what I call
"A Peeling"

often he sighs
when I look in his eyes
& sits on the bed
with a tired, "hi"
that's when I coo,
"I'll take care of you!"
by doing
what I call
"A peeling"

first, a kiss
on his down turned lips
take off his jacket
with an expert slip
remove his tie
with purring sigh
how I love to go
"A peeling"

his shirts are fun
unbuttoned one by one
slip warm hands in
the excitement's begun
I think that I
saw a spark in his eye
from doing
what I call
"A peeling"

A nice warm hug
nice and snug
close the doors
give his belt a tug
I'm sure he's guessed
what's coming next
for he's smiling
while I'm
"A peeling"

his clothes in a heap
In one fell sweep
forgotten for now
in passion's heat
out goes the lights
it's gonna be some night
and we'll both
find it so
appealing...

~Tier
3/01

Jeffrey E. Osborne
Member

since 2001-11-01

Posts 160
out there

1 posted 2002-03-24 02:02 AM

I love this; both playful and a beautiful play on words. Your writing is "appealing" (heh heh

) I'll be looking for more of your work.
- Jeff

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-03-24 03:09 AM

Damn! And thanks! LMAO

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-24 01:10 PM

A wonderful play on words, and other things...you tugged this along very well...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-24 01:14 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a cute and lovely passionate poem, sweet friend, your gorgeopus words always make me sile and are appealing to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-24 01:52 PM

O wow did you ever do a great job on this one Tiers. Bravo, a most wonderful play on words and I was humming to it, ya know, it was like a little song. Wonderful and much much fun. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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