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We mixed but we're not a match |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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NOTE: THIS IS NOT ABOUT NOAH! We were smothered together like peanut butter & jelly You once gave me a rush, now it's nausea in my belly I will never be your wife, nor you my hubby So why don't you cool it with all the lovey-dovey? Like a child, you still play with matchbox cars Backstreet boys are your favorite stars Don't hate me because I'm outspoken I broke your heart because you allow it to be broken You simply are not my type of man Please don't try to get me back, I'm hip to your plans You can't even cook me a meal And you're so feminine sometimes it's unreal You must've been my girlfriend, not my boyfriend I wish I never met you, so i'll just pretend No we can't be friends No we won't be enemies Just block me out of your memory [This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-21-2002 07:14 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RosePetal, Well now that is a put down if I ever read one. Enjoyed the read. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
If this message isn't loud and clear, I don't know what will be.  Enjoyed! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Whoa, I am glad I am not him. LOL, you sure told him off. floria Floria |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Woah! I don't know what to say to that! Can I borrow this to give to my ex? I am a rabid horse. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh love, I am sooooo sorry your ex-boyfreind treated you so unfairly like this, never let him get to you for you deserve so much more happiness and love than that always! (kiss on lips) I will always be yours, my love, you will always be the Gwenevere of my heart, the Shakira of my soul! (kisses) I love you, my love!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Skyfire, ofcourse you can borrow it!!! thanx girlie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You really wrote this one to say a lot...glad this is not about Noah...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! There is no fury like the fury of a woman, unleashed! Whoever he is he'd better run! Now this is what I call communicating. LOL... Charge, Joanna!  ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Damn Rose, nicely written beatdown.  ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
thanks friends glad you enjoyed my madness |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Joanna darling girl I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you Fabulous writing. NOW this is what I call flaming, utterly utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
" Ouch, A Poetic KICK 2 the curb. " A Musician must make his Music, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You tell him, Joanna!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, Woohoo! I like this  It has fire! It's good to stand up for yourself!I too am glad it is not about Noah Yay for that.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
WE KNOW THIS COULD NEVER BE OUR NOAH  .Great expression of feelings. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Whew!!!! I'm so glad it wasn't about our sweetie, Noah.  Great sock it to em poem, Joanna...  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I'm sure glad you said it wasn't about Noah. He's too sweet for this nuclear meltdown poem. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh, I was about to write a friendship card to send to Noah....Whew!!! Go get the other guy...give em ****!!! |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
The first sign that he was no good was he was a BackStreet Boy fan! Just can't trust them! thanks for sharing-R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
We were smothered together like peanut butter & jelly I loved this line! You told him I think very clearly that it is over...wow...now THAT is outspoken! Very well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
OMG! I had one of those feminine ones a long time ago...that's what came between us. Thanks for the laugh. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Joanna, will you stop beating around the bush and just come out and say what you mean? Go get 'em, tigress!  |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
OUCH, Joanna! I wouldn't want to get on your bad side. LOL! Very well expressed!Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Just WOW! |
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