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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-03-23 10:15 PM





When the wind whispers

Do then genuinely listen
in tranquility, carefully
whispers wing upon the wind
as thee shall send to me

Littlest, tender sayings
come vis-à-vis to tease
warily wrought of wit
then my ear to please

Silly modest greetings
come murmuring this day
catch the smile upon my lips
when I wing them back your way


~*~

repost from 10
8 November 2000


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-23 10:20 PM


Sunshine,
Just lovely.

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2 posted 2002-03-23 10:21 PM


Lovely indeed, Karilea!
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3 posted 2002-03-23 10:31 PM


Love it KJ....as a small fairy would say
in a whisper...

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4 posted 2002-03-23 10:51 PM


A beautiful whisper of love, Karilea.
~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-03-23 11:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the wind awlays serenade you with true loves happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-23 11:25 PM


Hear my message on the wind..
My love call in the breeze.
Let my words caress your hair
In ways that will appease.

Let my love call touch your cheek
And know my hopes are pinned
On knowing you can hear me speak
Through whispers on the wind.

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7 posted 2002-03-23 11:33 PM


This is so good, Sunshine. And, I love the little fairy.
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8 posted 2002-03-24 12:25 PM


See I told you we were Sisters,
we sure look alike dont we?

(this was lovely by the way)

~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~
Albert Einstein

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"Silly modest greetings
come murmuring this day
catch the smile upon my lips
when I wing them back your way"

IWIWT

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10 posted 2002-03-24 02:18 AM


Karilea,
What simple delight we find in our relationships. What a satisfying read. Thanks.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

Martie
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11 posted 2002-03-24 09:39 AM


Karilea

Loverly, loverly!



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12 posted 2002-03-24 10:20 AM


enjoyed
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13 posted 2002-03-24 11:38 AM


Oh Karilea, this was lovely, lovely, lovely, I mean I could fill the entire page with lovelies..floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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14 posted 2002-03-24 11:41 AM


Sometimes I wonder if all the whispering going on is the reason the wind blows so hard and fast sometimes...like an overloaded telegraph system...hehehee...~~just teasing~~

Beautifully done Sunshine and I loved the picture...

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15 posted 2002-03-24 01:05 PM


Sunshine:  I like the way you treated this airy subject
with fairy-dust flourish from magical pen.
The read-between-the lines are some great advice!
Verrrrry coool stuff!
tSR

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16 posted 2002-03-24 04:28 PM


These whispers shout love and caring from our Karilea!

Shenachie

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17 posted 2002-03-28 09:55 AM


Beautiful!!!

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18 posted 2002-03-28 10:13 AM



Ah Charisma, you whispered this up from the archives!  How nice of you!

Thanks to everyone who took time to enjoy this one with me!  You poet people are perspicacious in your passion!

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19 posted 2002-03-28 03:52 PM


When the wind whispers, you do listen... and then your pen writes magic. *S* This is beautiful, Sunshine. *S*
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20 posted 2002-03-28 07:36 PM


Love this...I sure do!   Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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