Open Poetry #19 |
When the wind whispers |
Sunshine
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When the wind whispers Do then genuinely listen in tranquility, carefully whispers wing upon the wind as thee shall send to me Littlest, tender sayings come vis-à-vis to tease warily wrought of wit then my ear to please Silly modest greetings come murmuring this day catch the smile upon my lips when I wing them back your way ~*~ repost from 10 8 November 2000 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Just lovely. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Lovely indeed, Karilea! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love it KJ....as a small fairy would say in a whisper... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful whisper of love, Karilea. ~hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the wind awlays serenade you with true loves happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hear my message on the wind.. My love call in the breeze. Let my words caress your hair In ways that will appease. Let my love call touch your cheek And know my hopes are pinned On knowing you can hear me speak Through whispers on the wind. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so good, Sunshine. And, I love the little fairy. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
See I told you we were Sisters, we sure look alike dont we? (this was lovely by the way) ~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~ |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Silly modest greetings come murmuring this day catch the smile upon my lips when I wing them back your way" IWIWT |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, What simple delight we find in our relationships. What a satisfying read. Thanks. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Loverly, loverly! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Karilea, this was lovely, lovely, lovely, I mean I could fill the entire page with lovelies..floria Floria |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Sometimes I wonder if all the whispering going on is the reason the wind blows so hard and fast sometimes...like an overloaded telegraph system...hehehee...~~just teasing~~ Beautifully done Sunshine and I loved the picture... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Sunshine: I like the way you treated this airy subject with fairy-dust flourish from magical pen. The read-between-the lines are some great advice! Verrrrry coool stuff! tSR |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
These whispers shout love and caring from our Karilea! Shenachie |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!! Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Charisma, you whispered this up from the archives! How nice of you! Thanks to everyone who took time to enjoy this one with me! You poet people are perspicacious in your passion! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When the wind whispers, you do listen... and then your pen writes magic. *S* This is beautiful, Sunshine. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this...I sure do! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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