Open Poetry #19 |
Caramel Sunset |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Caramel Sunset By: Noah Eaton 3/23/02 I trace each texture and line of your face Caressing the hair from your ear back in ocean waves The heavens bask through the periwinkle sgraffito ceiling Simpering with honeyed horizons of mushy unconditional passion In this moment karma is obsolete, fate is overrated Softly sunburned in the lips of the Sun Warbling like Eros and Psyche against sexy tropical punch canvas Earth, wind, and fire balming us in loves sacred dance Together we soak up the sun, wearing your flesh upon mine My heart beating with yours, echoing laughter to each other Carrying you as close to the heavens as I can Tasting the peach-and-cream colors of our loves divinity Softly I lick the butterscotch sweetness of your lips Kissing you as the sun is in proportion to the both of us Matchmade together, soulmates embraced in this caramel sunset, God our wedding host We're two angels with one destiny, condemned together forever more... Melting in heavenly afterglow Into each other... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-23-2002 06:09 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Together we soak up the sun, wearing your flesh upon mine My heart beating with yours, echoing laughter to each other Carrying you as close to the heavens as I can Tasting the peach-and-cream colors of our loves divinity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ beautiful..... ~~Connie~~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...Another gorgeous poem with exquisite poetic language. Nobody puts words together better than you when it comes to passions. ***Ivy Rose |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Caramel kisses, how tasty and sweet. Noah, you always come up with a honeyed treat for us. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ I love this....wow sweet friend....you are so soft and so romantic.... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah...your writing just gets better and better. Love this one! Hugs to you sweetie! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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