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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2002-03-23 04:37 PM

All Temperatures Fahrenheit

All the hurtful words
have been spewed,
spent in stormy bursts
of failure,
years of waning love.

Gusts of air pushed through teeth
contribute to the day’s chill.
Topics turn banal: weather;
the travel of time.

Rain (weeping softy),
no thunder left to give,
only a weak cold front
moving slowly on.

© 2002 Corinne Bailey

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-23 04:42 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I can feel first the anguish then the cold thoughts that filled your heart of emptiness in the end, my heart goes out to you and I hope now the forecast for you is always sunny and filled with hope! (kiss on cheek) May you always weather each storm you confront with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-03-23 05:43 PM

Corinne, your work always, always causes me not to read once, or twice, but at least three times, to fully accept the impact from your pen...

you just don't write enough!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2002-03-23 08:29 PM

Thank you kindly, sweet Noah! You always have such uplifting words!

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Sunshine! Yes, I don't write enough. Life just doesn't give me much time these days and another writing project in the works!

Thanks again,

Corinne

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2002-03-23 09:02 PM

Excellent, Corinne.
Brrrr, I'm shivering.

As we seek shelter
in a warm place
dry, except for
our moistened whispers

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-23 09:20 PM

Corinne, I do understand the time crunch
prob....suffer from it myself..

You used nature well in expressing your
feelings and the mood...like this!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2002-03-23 10:28 PM

Excellent writing as always, Corinne!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-03-23 10:33 PM

Corinne,
A lovely write.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-03-28 11:26 PM

Corinne~
This has a velvet-intensity to it~
Beautiful expression~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2002-03-29 10:39 AM

All the hurtful words
have been spewed,
...
Rain (weeping softy),
no thunder left to give,

I really like this a lot, Corinne... very well written! *S*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-03-29 11:19 AM

They say that all good things must end some day!
Makes me wonder if the storm was but a passing fancy,
or perhaps giving way to better days ahead. It's hard to say.
Sadly beautiful Corinne~

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