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Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-03-23 04:20 PM

there is simple sadness
overwhelming
expasperation til futility.
what creates it?
too many punches taken to dreams
will you understand the whole of this
or just a few lines?
its all brilliant
because of its slow accumulation of emotion
blended with a diluted me

there is exhuastion
creating denial
denial creating a wall without permission
permission from myself to feel
creating rebellion
and further self destruction.

will you understand the
whole
of this?
or will you only understand the sadness part?

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (03-23-2002 04:21 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-23 04:25 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Siofra, this is so very sad, I think we can all be seduced by grief and doubt every now and then and it hurts me to see so many try not and nurse the infection but only dwell for long periods of time in tears! (sigh) My heart goes out to all that feel like this and I pray they can look to hope and heal the wounds, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

2 posted 2002-03-23 04:41 PM

There is certainly more than sadness here. Keep rebelling! You'll break those doubts yet! Good write!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-03-24 04:00 AM

Nicely expressed...James

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2002-03-25 03:49 PM

Yes, there is more than sadness. Very deep hurt, I think. Keep writing.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-03-25 03:54 PM

I'm sure that the whole of this will be understood. . .

there's a depth here that almost gets by you. . . well done. . .

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