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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2002-03-22 08:26 PM

Succulent lips surrender in the night
breathless upon whispers of seduction
sweet wine, satiates desires
tangled within vines of contentment
secluded within the vineyards of night
peeling gently our silhouettes' Devine
lost within the clusters of your kiss
melting upon the softness of your touch
drench me with goblets of summer rain
bathing in the heady musk of you
til bouquet of our souls entwines
sipping from the brim of the moon
reveling in our toast of sheer pleasure
as moonlight oozes passion from your lips

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-03-22 08:28 PM

tangled within vines of contentment
secluded within the vineyards of night
peeling gently our silhouettes' Devine

Oh this is beautiful, Victoria....
actually...the whole poem is beautiful.

many hugggssss!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2002-03-22 08:29 PM

I love this.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-22 08:30 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous visions of true love always make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) May you foreve dance in the moonlight with your love and be swept off your feet in the summer breeze of loves magic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2002-03-22 08:41 PM

This is so lovely and sensually written, Victoria. I think I'll keep it.

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-03-22 09:14 PM

Enjoyed Victoria...James

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

6 posted 2002-03-22 10:09 PM

~~mmmmmm~~
like sunheated summer rain
a wine poem drenches our spirit
making us aware of every nerve
tingling like unexpected touches-in-the-dark
lighting blind rooms
with romantic brilliance
Jeff

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2002-03-22 10:48 PM

This is so yummy and sensual. And did you know I was sipping a glass of the devine vine
as I read this? Thank you, Victoria. It's a beautiful poem.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-22 10:51 PM

Now this is fine wine..if there ever was
fine wine!...Enjoyed this Vic...you smash
the most succulent grapes...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-03-23 08:40 AM

thank you so much guys and gals..

appreciate you kind comments as always

~Victoria~

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-03-23 09:25 AM

Victoria, how beautiful this is and you never disappoint with your writing. wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-03-23 10:14 AM

enjoy your read

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

12 posted 2002-03-23 02:22 PM

I think you could turn a torrential thunderstorm into a heady romantic adventure! Wow...succulently written!

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

13 posted 2002-03-23 03:33 PM

Victoria...SEDUCTIVE, SULTRY POEM!!! Love the use of the Moon in this delightful poem.

***Ivy Rose

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-03-23 04:10 PM

floria vandana dulcie ivy..thank you so much from your sweet comments..nice hearing from you all..hugss

~Victoria~

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2002-03-28 06:51 PM

Succulent lips surrender in the night''

a little late in replying to this, I was out of town, but so glad I found this...I LOVE that line....HUGSSSS to you...

lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2002-03-28 08:21 PM

Victoria, beautifully and sensually penned!
Enjoyed so much! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

17 posted 2002-03-28 10:56 PM

thank you so much nancy and lauren..nice to hear from both of you sweeties ...hugss

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

18 posted 2002-03-29 07:07 AM

Sipping from the brim of the moon. How poetic, Miss Vic.
Love this.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

19 posted 2002-03-29 07:35 AM

yes, you are the Queen of Sensual..*s

hugsss
M

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

20 posted 2002-03-29 03:59 PM

The title alone begins the process of imagination and places one back in a time of long ago...

this is good...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

21 posted 2002-03-29 04:57 PM

thank you all so much..appreciate your kind words..hugss

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