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PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-03-22 07:54 PM

You don't know what you do
when not with you, tempted to be blue.
I thus enjoy your picture,
you and me seem to be the perfect mixture.
You don't know what you do.
You don't know what you do.

Hold my hand, intertwine our fingers.
After your image flows by, your scent lingers.
Just be near, let me know you are near.
Your voice, you voice it melts me.
Let me hold you dear, content I'll be.

Simple pleasures, all we do is talk.
Long to hold you close as we walk.
As we banter back and forth,
my heart slams into forth.
Your depth, your past, your pain
I feel your pain so deeply, it's hard to keep sane.

You are a mirror of my soul.
My heart is spinning out of control.
Every time we talk on and on
the more my reservations are gone.
You don't know what you do.
You don't know what you do to me.

3/22/02

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-22-2002 07:55 PM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-03-22 07:56 PM

Aw, Ti... Sweetie... *hugs Ti real hard again* *sigh* I don't know what to tell you... but you know that I'm here for you, right?

Zu is my hero

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-22 08:01 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is such a beautifully sensitive sentimental poem, sweet friend, may your love forever be the mirror of your heart and touch you deeply with endless reservations of eternal love and hope! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-03-22 09:46 PM

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-03-22 10:40 PM

I'll bet this girl feels the same for you, If not, then she is crazy! This is very heartfelt and I especially loved the lines

You are a mirror of my soul
My heart is spinning out of control

(hugs)

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-03-22 10:43 PM

Thank you Rose.

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

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