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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-03-22 04:06 PM



Desperate Attempts


Desperate attempts still
Wanting horrific pain caused
Pain yes, falling no
Persistence seems to fit you
Standing my ground me
Desperation I'll not feel
Shock is all over
Not handing over my will
I'm whole again, I've healed


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
Friday, March 22, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-03-22 05:01 PM


Zinsser,
Well thank goodness for that. Interesting

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-03-22 05:06 PM


I like interesting... : )
Thanks
~~Connie~~

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3 posted 2002-03-22 08:57 PM




YAY!!! Yes, yes, that's the spirit, never let anyone attempt to shackle you like that, for you are a very loving and special person and you deserve the greatest love and respect always! (kiss on cheek) This is a powerfully sincere poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-03-23 01:42 PM


Noah, Thank You sweet friend
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