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Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-03-18 12:20 PM

A poet in love,
Inspired by the moon,
Writes his heart's dreams
In bold strokes
Of comet tails
Across a brown-eyed sky
Whose stars twinkle in delight
At his art.

A poet in love,
Warmed by those rays,
Weaves his soul's desires
In finest thread
Of crystal light
Around an auburn tapestry
Whose pattern breathes again
At his touch.

A poet in love,
In love with his moon,
Shows that love every day
In these words
Of his heart.
Making her face smile,
Bringing peace to her life
With his love.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-03-18 12:53 PM

You must really be a poet in love to pen such a beauty as this!
Thank you for sharing Romeo

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-18 01:19 PM

Moonlight Romeo,
That's alot of love. Enjoyed

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-03-18 01:35 PM

I love this..it is so beautifully written

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-18 01:37 PM

You ought to write like this more...often, or just more, period...

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2002-03-18 01:50 PM

Too sweet! Thanks for the read!

I am a rabid horse.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-03-18 01:53 PM

Yep...takes one to know one! Really liked this alot!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-03-19 09:04 PM

The last three lines glowed like the moon beams. Nice~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-19 09:09 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such beautiful declarations of love from your golden heart, you truly are our odern romeo! (sigh) May you forever share the magic of the moonlight with your Juliet, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!

may love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-03-19 09:29 PM

MoonLightRomeo~
*sigh*

'A poet in love,
Inspired by the moon,
Writes his heart's dreams
In bold strokes
Of comet tails
Across a brown-eyed sky
Whose stars twinkle in delight
At his art.'

Just beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-03-20 02:21 AM

Really enjoyed...James

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

11 posted 2002-03-20 01:42 PM

Thank you all very much. It makes me happy to know that you enjoy my work.

Thank you again.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

12 posted 2002-03-21 12:54 PM

This is lovely writing, Sir..and I happen to know that a poet in love does just this sort of thing.

enjoyed.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2002-03-21 01:27 AM

Ah yes, a poet in love. Such beautiful poetry comes from this place in our hearts. This is lovely sir. Somebody is inspiring you well.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

14 posted 2002-03-21 05:58 AM

Awwwwwww...this was very sweet and romantic...nicely done!

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

15 posted 2002-03-22 10:06 PM

A poet in love,
In love with his moon,
Shows that love every day
In these words
Of his heart.
Making her face smile,
Bringing peace to her life
With his love.

*sigh*
I love it Romeo.

SPlendidly done.
A very warm, sweet romantic piece.

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

Siofra

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since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

16 posted 2002-03-23 03:15 PM

there is some wonderful imagery in this, Dear.

Loved it! You're growing it seems.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

17 posted 2002-03-23 03:19 PM

Moonlight Romeo...In this poem, lies depth of beauty, eternal echoes of love. WONDERFUL POEM!!! ***Ivy Rose

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