Open Poetry #19 |
Winter oceans fallen |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I saw the sea upon the oceans nightmare melody behind the walls of whisper beyound the fog we live I looked upon the sea for the fortunes lost the time I cannot breathe. I saw the sea upon the last light of the suns cool rays bringing up the fallen angels that what their right to scream out loud to a forgotten world that measures all of us to death and slowly, we find ourselves in anger lost as we forget. I saw the sea, as it toppled the last remaining city to late for silent prayers the screams are all left to bare in second thoughts we find that the heart is want to die unless you stare into the sea to find the peace you wanted to be. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I saw the sea, as it toppled the last remaining city to late for silent prayers the screams are all left to bare in second thoughts we find that the heart is want to die unless you stare into the sea to find the peace you wanted to be. ================================== a hauntingly beautiful write Michael...written with your trademark mix of longing and imagery. good to see your name here poet of the wind. Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is a very powerfully emotional poem, sweet friend, may you find your reflection in the ocean of life and seek the inner-peace your heart desires ever so much! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerfully expressed thouight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's not often I miss the beaches I once walked, but you've got me missing 'em now... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this, the imagery and thought. Very good. |
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