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I was not me when we were together
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I was not me when we were together |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I could have been with you forever but we were not meant to be together Somehow I knew I'd be better off without you Because with you I cried when I laughed I was sad when I was happy I was not me when I was with you So I decided the best for me was to live without you while thinking about you |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
OH I LOVE THIS POEM WALKER! It makes me think of my first love and I wanted to be with him forever but I knew deep down that we were not meant to be. thank you for this!  |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
A lot of wisdom and courage in this. Very good. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there's a lot here indeed walker. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) WOW, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I think we can all relate to these feelings every now and then, sweet friedn, I hope now you have found the love of your life and will always be meant to be together happily! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You portray the tug of the soul very well. I like your style. ThisDiamond |
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