Open Poetry #19 |
circumstance VII |
mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Click here to hear the devil rock. [This message has been edited by mirror man (03-22-2002 02:18 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll be coming back just to hear the music...loved the poetic story! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Sunshine -- thank you very much. This devil, is of course, a combination of several. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow, this is so very powerful, sweet friend, it seems here Death can relate to Fate, and if we break these rules and cannot embrace each moment with happiness and hope, it's as if the Devil robs us of our time and of loves chances! (big hugggssssss) Your voice is always so amazing in your verse, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Thank you, Noah. I always appreciate your comments; they tell me a lot. Thank you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A strong comment on the power of choice... and the abyss of poor choice... Very talented...enjoyed the music. ThisDiamond |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
ThisDiamond -- thank you for reading and taking the time to listen to the music. Concerning choice, I hadn't thought of it like that, and it certainly is a poor choice, but unfortunately too many don't have much else. It got for me so bad that I just gave up choosing. Interesting comment. Thank you. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha...came back...to listen and have one more read...so glad I did... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
MirrorMan: a fascinating bubble about to pop when the heels are singed in flee of dark trouble the soul is stone-throated seeing Black Angels winged tsr |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Sunshine -- ha, ha. Thank you for coming back for the music. I enjoy writing it and knowing others enjoy listening. ShadowRider -- yes, you've said a mouthful. Horrible fascination, trouble that swallows your soul, speechless sometimes. These places are to me the beginning of the road to hell. Thank you. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mirror man...the mood of music and poem is chilling. You wake feeling easily with this combination of your talent. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Thank you, Martie. You are always very perceptive. I am being perhaps too subtle with this one, but I never met one who had a tail and horns. Ha, ha! Thank you. |
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