Open Poetry #19 |
Dance For Me |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“DANCE FOR ME” by Bill Charles ~~~~ This guitar I strum is singing, playing rhythm, for your muse… Let it enter you slowly inside, magic you’ll know, of the blues… My fingers all over these frets, close your eyes, just listen… They’ll talk to you all night, until you’re moving, in unison… Your hips swaying, warm all over, can’t stop, you’re in my trance… Thoughts of yours will disappear, all you’ll want, is to take a chance… Sweet notes of this mellow guitar, will capture you, of things yet to be… Come closer, move nearer the stage, I need you there, dance for me… ~~~~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Bill - We all need someone to dance in front of our stage, or in our heart. Very nice. This poem might inspire me to take guitar lessons.lol Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your gorgeous guitar forever strum love to her heart and may she forever dancw with you to eternity! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you always sing the blues so wonderfully! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Brace yourself...I'm sure the line is forming! Fun write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Bill...and OH how I love to dance. This music is inspiration indeed! Good write my friend! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *I was going to say my shoes were in having new taps put on them...then I listened to the music and it wasn't tap dancing music I heard* ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes Larry is right..im first in line ha...i loved this...my favorite... you make me want to dance... ~Vic |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hey, Bill. Can I sit and wathch? Wheee! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!! I am sure she dances with you with love shining in her eyes...A beautiful and romance filled poem...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
Oh How sweet. Thank you Bill , makes me want to dance for my love. Jen Treasure every moment that you have! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent BC...unfortunately...I don't dance worth a hoot...but liked this one.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It doesn't matter how full our dance card is, I suspect there is a particular one who moves in perfect rhythm, and who doesn't mind letting us step on their feet. Love your romantic words BC~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
dancing a slow dance together is so romantic! Music is a wondeful thing and I so badly want to learn to play guitar |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good thoughts...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is very beautiful, Bill...you write of the music of life. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Bill, I was already dancing..this makes it even more fun. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My brother plays the guitar, only I don't think he's ever done it quite like this...and this would be my preference... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bill, I cant stand it anymore, passions has got to put music on here so we could hear your beautiful music. great musical poem. floria Floria |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Bill, you write the words, Ill write the notes, and play the songs!@ This is wonderful! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
WOW!!!! What a dance this must be!!! Wonderful poem just smouldering in its sensuality and the dance of amour. Really enjoyed the mood and the beauty of this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
From the back page: *BUMP!* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you for this Larry..I have been anxiously waiting for Bill to return to us... * M |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bill this is wonderful, so soft and beautiful Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello! Found myself floating on the strum of every chord. Nice melody. ThisDiamond |
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