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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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gypsy wind with autumn leaf nails strums waterfall guitar marble mouth children praying with half words skinny leg ghosts with green hair try to dance without moving root feet eucalyptus scent old woman perfume left on cloud sheets dark stone jewelry dropped in the sand by a nude ocean as she crashes her breasts on Neptune's belly hurry up love before the day finds her restless silence tiptoes behind dark trees watches over boulder fences mistress dawn steps from her bath orange breasts over purple towel mountains ©Dark |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was about the most beautiful dawning I have ever seen! I walk the seawall almost every morning and I don't think I will ever look at the ocean quite the same way again (I may peek through my fingers though)  - Absolutely breathtaking work, and I like your new picture too! These both had the element of "the Age of Aquarius" about them and to me that is not a bad thing!The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Mysteria, thank you my friend, a pleasure to have that thought for the day..makes my view better too |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
slam-dunk scenic stuff, DS. wow! Doing a stint here at Passions for a few, but i always read and still am amazed by the wonderful panaroma you etch by your poet hands. tSR |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SR, good to see you amigo, thank you for the read and reply...will look you up here |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
dark stone jewelry dropped in the sand by a nude ocean as she crashes her breasts on Neptune's belly hurry up love before the day finds her restless wonderful.... do so enjoy reading what drips from your pen... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I saw the entire vision of the ocean sunrise reading this, and I also envisioned the sea foam coming out of the ocean like the whipped cream on a lemon meringue pie and Aphrodite danced to the mantra of Neptune in this incredible vision! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat, thank you for that review Noah, now I need to go get some pie...thank you my friend |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have two vivid images here...one coming from what the faucet sees, and the other...well, best I keep that one to myself... once again, you blow us away... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nooooo please share it with me.. well us... well maybe just me thank you babe |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
gypsy wind by a nude ocean trying to dance without moving feet finds her restless within these words...  Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-22-2002 09:42 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Sometimes your thoughts take me to places I'm sure I've been before~ This is one of those times~ Thank you for the gentle beauty here~ 'mistress dawn steps from her bath orange breasts over purple towel mountains' Exquisite ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lauren, thank you for your words and the little guy too Marge, so pleased to sooth the morning for you..thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Gorgeous sunrise from the balcony of your unique eyes. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Martie, bless you my lady friend, thank you so much |
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