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Open Poetry #19

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Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2002-03-22 12:30 PM

Well, ah.. I kind of disappeared again. School and plays and whatnot. Um, this was just kind of me, writing whatever I felt, and since it sounded cool, I made it into a poem.
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Darkness
Black, even
A single drop if blood,
Falling onto a blooming white rose,
Turning it crimson
No eyes could be seen,
but they were felt
They were felt ever so vividly,
By absolutely no one
Drip
The rose dies, as everything does
The life dripping out,
Much like the blood dripping onto it
Drip
The eyes, piercing,
Glaring at nothing
Petals, falling to the floor
The sound, the almost inaudible sound,
Causes a twitch
The tapping,
Tapping at the ground known as nothingness
Tapping, tapping away
Drip

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2002-03-26 11:17 AM

Zukene, not sure how to take this and from such a young person. I think we all have "black" days like this. I just hope this one didn't last too long. Like the style though, ME

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-03-26 12:02 PM

I enjoyed the image here-very dark. Sometimes I like dark.

Nan

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