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Your titles in my poem - A Love Poem
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Your titles in my poem - A Love Poem |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Your Titles In My Poem (A Love Poem) I saw you, a poet in love under cotton sky upon the hills of vale below weaving the quilt of sun in set to dance in moonbeams of blue. Through eyes communication your chestnut gaze of a gentle touch caresses the pages of me writing in whispers upon my skin of yes, darling, you are free, welcome to my soul. And heaven's light shines through you, my beacon of hope, my allure, my soul mate breathless in dreams come true in the kiss of hearts made whole. How boundless and beautiful is love composed in the poetry of fate through the blending of colors in rainbow swirls of us as our lives are strung together in perfect harmony. And though the night becomes the dawn you'll always have my heart. In the once again of purple twilight I will think of you and take flight love through the multitude of color, lost in you to soar through our promised sky. [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (03-21-2002 11:58 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words sparkle with much inspiration just as your words of love always inspire us all! (kiss on cheek) This is majestic and enchanting, sweet friend, I just know your love is going to cherish this forever happily, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is fun to do isn't it? You out did yourself Melissa~ Lovely poem. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That was just too clever, and reading the poem in two version was so cool! I loved the whole thing Melissa, but the message from the part bolded was more intense when you took the other words away. Does this have a name (the form) or were you creating something. If you were, you just taught me something valuable - less is sure more! This was absolutely beautiful. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for reading my lil' creation  This really is fun! It takes a life of it's own once you get started.Actually, this is the second 'titles in my poem' that I've done. I wrote one a few forums ago and I forget who originated it. Anyways, thanks to BluesSerenade for bringing it back! "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
  ty for including me. my moody muse needs to try this sometime. very cool melis...like how ya worked your soulmate theme in there Of all the things in me I could never be, |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
That was so cool! How unique!!! Zu is my hero |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Gotta respect something that must've taken this much patience! Very cool write. |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
you can and i have seen better from you, don't be too quick to publish, pearls are not harvested too soon |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Wow, another beautifully stringed song! Enjoyed this very much Melissa! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Two good reads, I enjoyed both. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very creaive Melissa. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Melissa, wow, how creative, love how you did this. floria Floria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . I like this . . . you have the touch for making these flow so well. . . great job Melissa. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How very nicely done. I like this. Nan |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Excellent...jwesley |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Very cool chickie :supegrin: I would never have the patience for this *chuckles* I enjoyed. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Beautiful & very creative, Melissa, loved the form...thanks for sharing... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Melissa I'm always impressed with your work its such a joy to read. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a lovely gift, Melissa! Cor |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Melissa, thank you very much for this very well crafted poem....flowed together very well, and thanx for including one of mine in it... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
splendid! You've done good girlie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Melissa, Always...you write the best poems! Cool job. Thanks. |
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