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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-03-21 10:45 PM

Double with a twist
drinking you whole as I savor and sip
you'll always have my heart
as there is no where else I would rather be
in conversation we speak
through our eyes communication
little leora waits patiently
blending into the flowers on the wall
like me, wanting to sing your song
as I lie down with me
but never alone
we are two very special people
sailing the magnificant seas
as the wind billows
our ships crossing there
cradled in the sunset
at the end of the day
time to back off a little
warning to a hostess named Nan
minding my manners
so as not to have a lock on my poems
my intentions are good
but often come out all wrong
my words rush in a breathless hush
it is what I've grown accustomed to
welcome to my soul
I've no answers to the questions
no matchlink.com to win
a chickenchicken little
who has stumbled across the road
in search of the pot of gold
where the blending of colors
really do transform
on the wings of an angel in deep blue
yes, darling, you are free
to be, to come and go
for I will always be here
among this garden of roses
we planted together so long ago
and when a north wind frenzy blows
I hope you will remember me
we mixed but we're not a match
a fate of fools
falling
succumbing to
the test
spread out for all to see a
Quilt of sun in set
searching for dreams to come true
guided by a beacon of hope
and all that you make me
when I am gone, and am no more
forever I will rise
upon moonbeams of blue~
recieving healing
beneath the light
of a thousand eyes
I will always keep a star for you
through the spring and summer
lighting my life
through winter's fall~~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Sorry for the lack of punctuation
I took all the titles that were at the top
and strung them together in record time.
This was fun for me to write, I hope you
don't mind and will enjoy~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-21-2002 10:49 PM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-03-21 10:50 PM

(smiling)...I want to see you model that dress again... I liked the way you turned just so in the mirror...

Very clever...it is amazing how the titles themselves can tell a story..

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2002-03-21 10:52 PM

How clever and it made a great poem

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-03-21 10:56 PM

What a great idea, Lori...
Maybe we should make this a new challenge.
Yours came out beautifully...
What do you think of the challenge idea?

hugggssss!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-21 10:58 PM

YAY!!! WOW, I LOVE IT, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! You always are full of wonderful poetic suprises, sweet friend, this is a delightful tribute to the wonderful poets and their coined titles here at Passions! (kiss on cheek) They are all sooooooo beautiful just as this poem and all your gorgeous poems are, sweet friend, this is outstanding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-03-21 11:02 PM

How cool is this??? Cool, very, very cool. You strung these together perfectly.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-03-21 11:06 PM

BluesSerenade~
A remarkable job on this piece~
*applause* *applause*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-03-21 11:07 PM

Cpat~ I love that skirt of mine.
Was just playing dress up, it's the little kid in me that likes to prentend she's a grown up!

  Thanks.  You're so right the titles are a story in themselves.
btw, I'll take two twists and an olive.

Melissa~ Thanks for reading I had such fun putting it together, considering it was already half written for me.  Nice to hear from you.

Lyra~ I like the challenge idea, not sure how to go about that though.  By the time I had posted there were more titles to choose from and they had changed in the order.
I literally went down the list at the time.
Nice to see you here dear heart and I hope your day was a restful one.

(edit again)

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-21-2002 11:09 PM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-03-21 11:09 PM

I'll give you one of my olives..I always ask for extra...

Play dress up anytime...I know I enjoyed

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-03-21 11:28 PM

Noah~ I love that phrase, "coined"
it has a nice ring to it is so true
the titles are like eye candy and
the poems themselves are like a sundae
with all the right fixings. Thanks Noah.

Tracey~ I'm so glad you liked this.
I could say the same thing about your replies, "how cool is she"

Marge~ Thanks for enjoying, your nice comments are always so warm and wonderful
and I appreciate them very much.

Cpat~

So nice of you to share.
I like your sense of humor!
Here put this trench coat on and pull
your hat down over your eyes and we can go as Bonnie and Clyde, or if you prefer we could go as Scarlett and Ret.
Wait, I forgot we aren't going anywhere. lol~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2002-03-21 11:28 PM

Oh yeah, I found a beacon of light! Thanks Lori that was fun but didn't look too easy. Great job.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2002-03-21 11:34 PM

Have my own hat... seeing how I shave my head..figured I should buy one to keep me from getting burned when I'm sitting out sipping.. we can go anywhere you want.. heck..Bonnie and Clyde were a bit violent..so may be I better be Bert and you can be Ernie (chuckling)

Have another.... with a twist.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-03-22 12:19 PM

Larry~ You always shine so brightly,
and are a joy to know.
Thank you kind Sir, cool Daddy-o

Cpat~ Right right, no violence,
But I am NOT going as Bert or Ernie,
how about Betty or Wilma~
Or I could go as a powerpuff girl!!

I've got a sideache from laughing so hard.
Thanks for the fun, don't be late now.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

13 posted 2002-03-22 12:25 PM

Ok... you can go as Betty... I just DONT look like Fred.... ( or barney unless you count that purple goofy kinda barney thing..I might have looked like him a couple of time after way too many with a twist, but then I don't remember much about those times.... hmmm) Where was I?

Oh.. yeah... How about you go as Betty Boop
and I'll go as Roger Rabbit

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

14 posted 2002-03-22 12:32 PM

Wow, that was beautiful. And sweet. Very cute ^^

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2002-03-22 12:42 PM

Oh hell why don't we go as the Clever's.
and leave the Beave at home.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2002-03-22 12:46 PM

Thanks Zukene~ It's nice to hear from you.
It was really a pleasure to write, but it somehow took on a mind of it's own.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

17 posted 2002-03-22 12:53 PM

(chuckling) Sure..... but I get ot be June!!! If we're going to be that square..we should at least make people wonder!

What time do I pick you up? Think they'll even get the costumes when we go out for dinner at Burger King?

excuse me a moment.

Miss?
Could I get another with a twist?
Bring my friend one too
she's been sitting here a while
looking blue.

Say, mind if I ask?
extra olives in my glass...
Again my friend would like the same
by the way, what's your name?

Cheers my friend!
Good times to all!

Guess I better make this one
my last call

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

18 posted 2002-03-22 01:07 AM

This is great! The titles may have been there to "string along" *LOL* but it takes a keen eye to put them together in any kind of cohesive sense...marvelous job Lori!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

19 posted 2002-03-22 03:18 AM

You did great stringing together these titles, and I am so happy you included my title too!

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

20 posted 2002-03-22 06:46 AM

even tho the words are not your own
they came out, as you can only write them.
How-d-ya-do-dat? *grin*
mucho enjoyable, Lor,
and have a great weekend LA!
jeff

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

21 posted 2002-03-22 10:05 AM

Oh my gosh,,, it even makes sense, LOL how in the world did you think of this, and how in the world did you do it. Great work. Bravo Blues. floria
Blues this is truly clever and since it is your original idea, may I try this myself on another board with other titles? floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

[This message has been edited by strbbux (03-22-2002 10:28 AM).]

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