Open Poetry #19 |
Strung Together (your titles) |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Double with a twist drinking you whole as I savor and sip you'll always have my heart as there is no where else I would rather be in conversation we speak through our eyes communication little leora waits patiently blending into the flowers on the wall like me, wanting to sing your song as I lie down with me but never alone we are two very special people sailing the magnificant seas as the wind billows our ships crossing there cradled in the sunset at the end of the day time to back off a little warning to a hostess named Nan minding my manners so as not to have a lock on my poems my intentions are good but often come out all wrong my words rush in a breathless hush it is what I've grown accustomed to welcome to my soul I've no answers to the questions no matchlink.com to win a chickenchicken little who has stumbled across the road in search of the pot of gold where the blending of colors really do transform on the wings of an angel in deep blue yes, darling, you are free to be, to come and go for I will always be here among this garden of roses we planted together so long ago and when a north wind frenzy blows I hope you will remember me we mixed but we're not a match a fate of fools falling succumbing to the test spread out for all to see a Quilt of sun in set searching for dreams to come true guided by a beacon of hope and all that you make me when I am gone, and am no more forever I will rise upon moonbeams of blue~ recieving healing beneath the light of a thousand eyes I will always keep a star for you through the spring and summer lighting my life through winter's fall~~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Sorry for the lack of punctuation I took all the titles that were at the top and strung them together in record time. This was fun for me to write, I hope you don't mind and will enjoy~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-21-2002 10:49 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling)...I want to see you model that dress again... I liked the way you turned just so in the mirror... Very clever...it is amazing how the titles themselves can tell a story.. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How clever and it made a great poem Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a great idea, Lori... Maybe we should make this a new challenge. Yours came out beautifully... What do you think of the challenge idea? hugggssss! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! WOW, I LOVE IT, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! You always are full of wonderful poetic suprises, sweet friend, this is a delightful tribute to the wonderful poets and their coined titles here at Passions! (kiss on cheek) They are all sooooooo beautiful just as this poem and all your gorgeous poems are, sweet friend, this is outstanding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How cool is this??? Cool, very, very cool. You strung these together perfectly. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ A remarkable job on this piece~ *applause* *applause* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Cpat~ I love that skirt of mine. Was just playing dress up, it's the little kid in me that likes to prentend she's a grown up! Thanks. You're so right the titles are a story in themselves. btw, I'll take two twists and an olive. Melissa~ Thanks for reading I had such fun putting it together, considering it was already half written for me. Nice to hear from you. Lyra~ I like the challenge idea, not sure how to go about that though. By the time I had posted there were more titles to choose from and they had changed in the order. I literally went down the list at the time. Nice to see you here dear heart and I hope your day was a restful one. (edit again) [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-21-2002 11:09 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'll give you one of my olives..I always ask for extra... Play dress up anytime...I know I enjoyed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ I love that phrase, "coined" it has a nice ring to it is so true the titles are like eye candy and the poems themselves are like a sundae with all the right fixings. Thanks Noah. Tracey~ I'm so glad you liked this. I could say the same thing about your replies, "how cool is she" Marge~ Thanks for enjoying, your nice comments are always so warm and wonderful and I appreciate them very much. Cpat~ So nice of you to share. I like your sense of humor! Here put this trench coat on and pull your hat down over your eyes and we can go as Bonnie and Clyde, or if you prefer we could go as Scarlett and Ret. Wait, I forgot we aren't going anywhere. lol~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Oh yeah, I found a beacon of light! Thanks Lori that was fun but didn't look too easy. Great job. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Have my own hat... seeing how I shave my head..figured I should buy one to keep me from getting burned when I'm sitting out sipping.. we can go anywhere you want.. heck..Bonnie and Clyde were a bit violent..so may be I better be Bert and you can be Ernie (chuckling) Have another.... with a twist. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Larry~ You always shine so brightly, and are a joy to know. Thank you kind Sir, cool Daddy-o Cpat~ Right right, no violence, But I am NOT going as Bert or Ernie, how about Betty or Wilma~ Or I could go as a powerpuff girl!! I've got a sideache from laughing so hard. Thanks for the fun, don't be late now. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ok... you can go as Betty... I just DONT look like Fred.... ( or barney unless you count that purple goofy kinda barney thing..I might have looked like him a couple of time after way too many with a twist, but then I don't remember much about those times.... hmmm) Where was I? Oh.. yeah... How about you go as Betty Boop and I'll go as Roger Rabbit |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
Wow, that was beautiful. And sweet. Very cute ^^ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh hell why don't we go as the Clever's. and leave the Beave at home. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks Zukene~ It's nice to hear from you. It was really a pleasure to write, but it somehow took on a mind of it's own. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Sure..... but I get ot be June!!! If we're going to be that square..we should at least make people wonder! What time do I pick you up? Think they'll even get the costumes when we go out for dinner at Burger King? excuse me a moment. Miss? Could I get another with a twist? Bring my friend one too she's been sitting here a while looking blue. Say, mind if I ask? extra olives in my glass... Again my friend would like the same by the way, what's your name? Cheers my friend! Good times to all! Guess I better make this one my last call |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
This is great! The titles may have been there to "string along" *LOL* but it takes a keen eye to put them together in any kind of cohesive sense...marvelous job Lori! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You did great stringing together these titles, and I am so happy you included my title too! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
even tho the words are not your own they came out, as you can only write them. How-d-ya-do-dat? *grin* mucho enjoyable, Lor, and have a great weekend LA! jeff |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my gosh,,, it even makes sense, LOL how in the world did you think of this, and how in the world did you do it. Great work. Bravo Blues. floria Blues this is truly clever and since it is your original idea, may I try this myself on another board with other titles? floria Floria "Alas for those that never sing, But die with all their music in them" (Oliver Wendell Holmes) [This message has been edited by strbbux (03-22-2002 10:28 AM).] |
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