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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-03-20 11:16 PM

Cotton colors
stitched at the seams
connecting the patterns
hemmed at the knee
an original fashion
that fits into shape
designs on desire
as I dance in the mirror
trimmed at the edge
in feminine lace
sized up and down
each button in place
spinning a twirl
zipped at the waist
sashays on the ruffle
that flair in the breeze~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-03-20 11:21 PM

Cool...like watching you dance!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-20 11:28 PM

Ah what a perfect way to end my evening!
I could picture you there dancing down the page...wonderful imagery! Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs nite, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-03-21 12:23 PM

Duncan~ If I were you....

ahem, need I say more!  Oh and thanks for reading.
I'm steering clear of the fluff, for now anyway.

Nancy~  Thanks for being so sweet.
I'm out of here tonight,  I don't want to get caught in the crossfire!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-03-21 01:42 AM

Blues,
I think I pretty much have that pictured. Wow.

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

5 posted 2002-03-21 01:58 AM

The stitch of words that put together the image of a beautiful pattern.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-03-21 03:49 AM

beautiful

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

7 posted 2002-03-21 06:03 AM

Hummmmm...somebody get a new party dress?

I bet it is stunning!

I enjoyed this muchly!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-21 08:42 AM

(smiles) This is a very beautifully touching poem, sweet friend, your gorgeous imagery always makes me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2002-03-21 09:01 AM

Hmmm Think I am with Duncan..enjoyed watching you dance...and the words stitched together

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2002-03-21 09:14 AM

little more to the left please
where the sun shines through
just a bit...yes

enjoyed it lady

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-03-21 12:42 PM

Blues, how imaginative this is, I could just see you standing there before the mirror. Great work. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-03-21 06:35 PM

Blues~

this is just beautiful....you have woven those cotton threads just perfectly....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-21-2002 06:36 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2002-03-22 12:51 PM

Thank you everyone for reading, I had fun with this. It's nice to be read by you all. Thanks again~

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