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Looking Back |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I know Sometimes It hurts When I looked back At those memories looking back at those times we used to sing It together I missed those days, Wished you would feel the same where I can't be there with you I would hear your voice calling In my dreams Hope you too, looking back at those memories I have shared with you Looked back at those memories of love we used to make And realise how pericous love was Looking back at those years of love, I cried at night I tried to smile with through these memories I have made with you Looking back those memories at those of days of memories, looking back |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very lovely! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me smile! (smiles) May you forever treasure these memories and may each brand new day bring you many more when you hold love close to your heart! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely written Vandana, I always enjoy your poetry. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vandana....I think we all do that...from time to time... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you sing such beautiful sentiments in verse..... memories hold our spirits intact it's true we can never go back but the days we walked will walk within and beside us forever i really completely identified with this piece of work! thank you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Those are some precious memories Vandana. Sometimes on a cold night they are enough to keep you feeling warm. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Good memories are so refreshing to look back on, to dwell on, I love this, great work here Vandana, floria Floria |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Vandana- Reflecting back on days gone by is sometimes very painful and sad. You capture that feeling very well. Nice writing. Dave |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is absolutely one of my most favorites of yours and am tucking it into the library now. Wonderful....the memories..... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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