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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-21 10:09 AM



Your Song

do you still
like my voice
can I still sing
to your soul
there is a sound
of harmony
that makes
two hearts whole
it is the music
of life when
they are
in tune
and I sing
easier when
clouds don’t
cover the moon
my voice is
just as clear
the notes
are so strong
I know
all the words
and I still sing
your song

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Carolina
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC
1 posted 2002-03-21 10:25 AM


This is beautiful.  I enjoy reading your work.  

Live today as if it's your last.  Love today as if it's your first.   Lisa

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14
Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA
2 posted 2002-03-21 12:14 PM


This truly is a beautiful song... it has a lovely flow! Well done! I enjoyed!

Love,
Bonnie

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
3 posted 2002-03-21 12:43 PM


This is quite lovely. I always enjoy your poems.

Nan

Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
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Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2002-03-21 01:17 PM


i like ur poem iss fantastic. i hope you poss some more. you are a good poetic writter. keep up the good work you doin good.

love kevin reid
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5 posted 2002-03-21 09:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous song from your heart, sweet friend, I also think this would make wonderful music! (kiss on cheek) May his voice forever chant harmony to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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