Open Poetry #19 |
Moonbeams Of Blue |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Moonbeams Of Blue I stepped outside this summer night so fair, There was a difference in this dark of night. Of everything around I was aware, It had a cast of blue that shimmered bright. For all the trees their limbs were of azure, And all the grass below the colors cast, Were of the oddest shade, a tint so sure, And as I looked about I held it fast. The moon itself it seemed vanilla cream, And yet the midnight ink of sky was deep. I prayed that this was real and not a dream, A scene so haunting that I could not sleep. Perhaps this night The Lord was not asleep. And took artistic liberties to heart. He dipped His brush in paint piled in a heap. Created with this mystic shade His art. And then the earth he painted with a hue, That shimmered in the glowing of the moon. For every thing the beams lit turned to blue, And night for me would surely end too soon. Floria [This message has been edited by strbbux (03-21-2002 09:45 AM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Floria Hi there this is such a wonderful piece of writing, this is so pretty and visual I like this one such a lot. You are an excellent writer and this is quite wonderful. This is a keeper for certain. You don’t mind going into my library do you? Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Krissy it would be an honor to be in your library, and I thank you so much. floria Floria |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Floria The imagery in this is wonderful..a flow of words that took me there and at the same time made me wish that I had seen it. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This was my favorite hon..hugs..loved it..beautiful images.. Victoria~
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Floria~ You 'know' I can't resist the moon and this is just so filled with imagery~ LOVE IT~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I can see it in my mind-what a vision! Nan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Floria, your paintbrush is so full of vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing your special moonbeams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, A lovely, lovely write. You used a full palette. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Martie thank you so much for your kind words. floria Victoria thank you for your kind reply. floria Marge, thank you, I always like hearing from you, floria Vandana, thank you. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Pilgrimage,thanks for your kind remarks. floria Midnite, anytime, I love sharing. floria Seymour, thank you much, floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, oh my gosh, I just love seeing everything when the moonlight shines at night, it always makes me sigh for that to me is the ost romantic vision of all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Floria This was wonderful. Such a beautiful painted with your very talented brush. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
thank you Noah for always encouraging me, floria sue thank you always for your sweet words of encouragement. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O floria. This is very beutiful. Your poetry just gets better and better. Thanks for sharing. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thanks Newell you encourage me a lot. floria Floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice floria...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And then the earth he painted with a hue, That shimmered in the glowing of the moon. For every thing the beams lit turned to blue, And night for me would surely end too soon. A beautifully written, delightful poem, Floria....I hope you got some sleep too! ~hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
James thank you so much. floria Lyra, thanks much, well on a night like that who can sleep? I remember it so vividly, even the smell of that night. I am so glad it came back into my memory, thanks for always commenting and "bumping" me. LOL. floria (((hugs back ))) Floria |
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